<Blake> Eternal War

[Blakeasirda]

Here are some cards I made for my Eternal War Set. So far I have only made them for the demon side. there will also be an opposing Angel side

 

 

[spoiler=Fires of the Abyss]

lore:

This card is used to Ritual Summon "Demonlord- Abysal Emperor". You must also Tribute monsters whose total Level Stars equal 10 or more from the field or your hand.

When this card is in the Graveyard you may remove it from play to destroy one monster on your opponents side of the field.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Abysal Emperor]

Lore:

This monster can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Fires of the Abyss." You must also offer monsters whose total Level Stars equal 10 or more as a Tribute from the field or your hand.

When this card is summoned you may Special Summon two monsters with "Demonlord" in their name from your graveyard.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Abysal general]

Lore:

When this card attacks, it is returned to the hand. When this card destroys a monster in battle you may move one card with "Demonlord" in its name to the top of the deck.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Baal]

Lore:

When this card is Normal Summoned, you may Special Summon one level 4 or lower monster with "Demonlord" in its name from your hand to the field in face up attack position.

When this card is in face up attack position your opponent may not select another monster with "Demonlord" in its name as an attack target.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Spirit]

Lore:

When this card is normal summoned from your hand you may choose and activate one of the following effects

o Search your deck for a card with "Demonlord" in its name and remove it from the deck. Shuffle your deck and place the card on the top.

o Special Summon one Level 4 or lower monster with "Demonlord" in it's name from the Graveyard. Any monster summoned this way may not attack this turn.

o Deal 200 x the number of monsters in the Graveyard with "Demonlord" in their name to your opponent.

This card cannot attack and is sent to the Graveyard at the end of the turn it is summoned.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Wolfen and Dara]

 

 

[-Griffin]

Other than that ritual Summoning 2 Generals for an OTK level of ATK, the cards here seem overall UP'd.

The first normal is, fair enough, a beatstick, but the second one seems like it serves no point to the Deck.

Most newer Ritual Spells have a secondary effect, usually removing them from play while they're in your Graveyard for some sort of bonus, you might want to consider that.

The second monster doesn't say where you move the card from, which could very much affect balance.

The third seems reasonable, good-ish beatstick with some nice effects. A bit slow, though.

The third monster first needs to say where it Summons the monster from with its second effect. The damage it deals with its third effect is also far too small to be worthwhile, and not many people would want to Normal Summon a 0 ATK monster, since it would leave them exposed.

 

The boss might be OP'd because of the psuedo-OTK, but otherwise the cards here are probably too weak to play at a decent level.

[Blakeasirda]

I will go and edit them immeadiatly. One thing. What does OTK mean?

[-Griffin]

One-Turn-Kill, 8000 damage in a single move.

[ragnarok1945]

give the ritual another effect, it's too boring right now

 

General and Baal both need drawbacks to balance them out

 

7/10

[-Griffin]

Everything Ragna just said is wrong, don't listen to him until he starts to understand balance.

 

 

Most newer Ritual Spells have a secondary effect, usually removing them from play while they're in your Graveyard for some sort of bonus, you might want to consider that.

The third monster first needs to say where it Summons the monster from with its second effect. The damage it deals with its third effect is also far too small to be worthwhile.

 

Those points from my first post still stand.

[Blakeasirda]

Everything Ragna just said is wrong' date=' don't listen to him until he starts to understand balance.

 

 

Most newer Ritual Spells have a secondary effect, usually removing them from play while they're in your Graveyard for some sort of bonus, you might want to consider that.

The third monster first needs to say where it Summons the monster from with its second effect. The damage it deals with its third effect is also far too small to be worthwhile.

 

Those points from my first post still stand.

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Yes It sorta didnt finish what I wanted ha ha I fixed them and they should be good now Thank you.

@ ragna. Baal is a Maurading captain that is stronger. General has a huge drawback because it is returned to the hand and has to have a tribute to come out after it attacks.

[-Griffin]

General and Baal still feel a bit weak, but the set's definitely much better now.

[guy22]

they're cool cards

[Blakeasirda]

cool thank you for taking the time to look at it over and over ha ha

[Blakeasirda]

Bump