Hekugan, The Lava Cobra

[DeathSDelano]

Image credit to Genzoman

 

Thought behind card. Just wanted to make card that gets power from battling monsters with specfic counters (Opposite of "Alien" monsters) and yes i got lazy on this card's effect

And i don't know if this img is OUed it if it is O well i don't really care XD

 

Once per turn, you may place 1 Burning Vemon counter on 1 face-up monster except this card. When a monster with a Burning Vemon counter battles this card, increase this cards ATK or DEF by x200 for each Burning Counter during damage calculation only.

 

New Version

 

Added a result of battle revive ability + card effect protection ability(both using the Burn Vemon Counters)

 

This card can only be Normal Summoned by Tributing any combination of 2 FIRE or Reptile-Type monsters. Once per turn, you can place 1 Burning Vemon counter on 1 face-up monster except this card.(max 5) When a monster with a Burning Vemon counter battles this card, increase this cards ATK or DEF by x200 for each Burning Counter during damage calculation only. If this card is destroyed as a result of battle by a monster with a Burning Vemon Counter on it you can Special Summon this during your next Standby Phase. If you do this card cannot attack until the End Phase. If this card would be destroyed by a card effect, you can destory a Level 4 or higher monster you control that has a Burning Vemon Counter instead.

[Brinolovania]

It's Ok...6.5/10

[ragnarok1945]

not the first time I've seen the pic

 

the effect is dull though, since it all does is gain atk via counters anyway

 

7/10

[Twin Seed]

Cool name and awesome pic. Put a limit on the amount of counters you can put on the card. Maybe add another effect, this one's kinda plain, simple, boring, etc. 7/10

[DeathSDelano]

Ok update version added tell me if you like that one better or if it needs more balancing out

[Twin Seed]

May = Can

 

Parenthesis on the end of the limit(first sentence).

 

Lower the counter limit to 2 or below, or you can raise it's level by 1 or 2.

 

For the revival, make it where you have to lose life points or discard a couple of cards randomly.

 

For the effect where other effects can't destroy it, make it where the monster has to be like a level 4 or over, other wise it could easily be overpowered.

 

6.5/10

[DeathSDelano]

edited even added a Normal Summoning Requirement

[ragnarok1945]

ok now it looks better, I'll raise my rate to 8.8/10