Burning Vemon Set(in Progress)

[DeathSDelano]

Img credit to Genzoman

[spoiler=lore]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 3 FIRE or 3 Fiend-Type monsters you control. Once per turn, place 1 Burning Vemon Counter on each face-up monster except this card. (max 5) When this card battles a monster with a Burning Vemon counter that monster is destroyed after damage calculation. If this card would be destroyed you can destroy 1 monster with 3 Burning Vemon Counters on it. If there are no Burning Vemon Counters on your opponent's side of the field this card cannot attack.

 

 

This card is just a simple attacker card that gives a counter when destroyed(similar to Alien Warrior)

[spoiler=lore]When this card is destroyed as a result of battle, place 1 Burning Vemon Counter on 1 monster your opponent controls.(max 5) When this card battles a monster with a Burning Vemon Counter increase this cards ATK by 200 during damage calculation only.

 

 

This card acts as Medium to Get out Kutonimatin(it is labeled as a SR)

[spoiler=lore]During your Standby Phase, place 1 Burning Counter on this card.(max 4) Increase the ATK of this card x200 for each Burning Counter on this card. During your Main Phase while this card has 4 Burning Counters you can Tribute this card to Special Summon 1 "Kutonimatin, The Fiend Lord of Burning Posion" from your hand, Deck, or Graveyard.

 

 

This a pure defense monster incase you may need to stall

[spoiler=lore]Once per turn, place 1 Burning Vemon Counter on 1 monster on the field except this card.(max 5) When this Defense Position monster is attacked by a monster with a Burning Vemon Counter increase this card's DEF by x200 for each Burning Vemon Counter on the attacking monster. This card can only attack while in Defense Position. This card cannot attack your opponent directly.

 

 

[spoiler=lore]Once per turn, place 1 Burning Vemon Counter on 1 face-up monster except this card.(max 5) During your Standby Phase, you can remove any number Burning Vemon Counters on your side of the field to activate one of the appropriate effects.

*1: Increase this cards ATK by 200 until End Phase.

*2: Destory 1 Spell or Trap card on your opponent's side of the field. This card cannot attack the turn you activate this effect.

*3: Increase the ATK of 1 face-up FIRE monster your control by 500. During the Battle Phase of the turn you activate this effect only the selected monster can attack.

*4: Destory all Spell and Trap cards on the field. During the turn you activate this effect you cannot activate or set any Spell or Trap cards until the End Phase.

*5: Destory all monsters on the field with Burning Vemon Counters except "Burning Vemon" monsters. During the turn you activate this effect you cannot conduct Battle Phase.

 

 

Basically a possible Double-Edge Sword Mirror Force for Burning Vemon Counters

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cards added on 1/29/09

 

[spoiler=lore]While this card is on the field you cannot attack with any other monsters. If this battles a monster without a Burning Vemon Counter that monster is not destroyed then place 1 Burning Vemon Counter on that monster.(max 5) Once per turn, you can select 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field than remove all Burning Vemon Counters on that card then increase this card's ATK x100 the number of Burning Vemon Counters removed until End Phase.

 

 

[spoiler=lore]Once per turn, place 1 Burning Vemon Counter on a face-up monster except this card. When this card is destroyed as a result of battle you can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower FIRE monster than place 1 Burning Vemon Counter on the monster Summoned by this effect.

 

 

[spoiler=lore]Once per turn, you can place 1 Burning Vemon Counter on a face-up monster except this card.(max 5) You can remove 2 Burning Vemon Counters to destroy 1 monster on the field. During the turn you activate this effect this card cannot attack. If this card is destroyed by a card effect you can remove 3 Burning Vemon Counters on the field to Special Summon this card during your next Standby Phase. During the turn this card is Special Summoned by this effect this card cannot attack a monster without a Burning Vemon Counter on it or attack your opponent directly.

 

 

(just putting this already seen card it just for convience for me)

[spoiler=Hekugan, The lava Cobra]

[spoiler=lore]

This card can only be Normal Summoned by Tributing any combination of 2 FIRE or Reptile-Type monsters. Once per turn, you can place 1 Burning Vemon counter on 1 face-up monster except this card.(max 5) When a monster with a Burning Vemon counter battles this card, increase this cards ATK or DEF by x200 for each Burning Counter during damage calculation only. If this card is destroyed as a result of battle by a monster with a Burning Vemon Counter on it you can Special Summon this during your next Standby Phase. If you do this card cannot attack until the End Phase. If this card would be destroyed by a card effect, you can destory a Level 4 or higher monster you control that has a Burning Vemon Counter instead.

 

 

[R.E.B. DRAGON]

nice 9.2/10

[DeathSDelano]

New card added (3rd card)

[ragnarok1945]

excellent, good to see you're back with the balanced cards

 

I see nothing wrong with the OCG in them, so they get 9.4/10 from me

[DeathSDelano]

New card added

[ragnarok1945]

for the venom counter card, change than to then

 

the atk gain part is fine since it's only 100* the counters removed

 

I'm unsure if you should make it permanent though

 

9/10

[DeathSDelano]

ok Fix'd

[ragnarok1945]

oh ok. I thought you were trying to get at something else

 

but whatever, in that case I'll raise my rate to 9.5/10

[The Official Jerk of YCM]

i only like the golem card 8.7/10

[DeathSDelano]

2 new cards up

 

i only like the golem card 8.7/10

 

if you would tell me why you only like that 1 card/ what you think could be improved/changed would be Nice and helpful instead of "i don't like -place rating-" or "i only like this card -place rating here-"

 

So please just say what you don't like about/like about(constructive criticism)

[ragnarok1945]

the 2nd card you added I think you misspelled Venom in the card name

 

that's about it though. I see nothing wrong with OCG or effect balance

 

9.9/10

[DeathSDelano]

i don't see any Vemon Misspellings in the card names

and thanks

[ragnarok1945]

so it was INTENTIONALLY spelled as Vemon?

[DeathSDelano]

Yes it was Spelled that way on Purpose