Bull3tM0nk3y Posted January 29, 2010 Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 [align=center][spoiler=New Year Promise]YCMembers, I have returned to make a some cards in the year's future, every card will be better than the last. And to start off the year, and YCM's new theme, here is Lazer Bodyguard. This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card gains 200 DEF for every Monster Card in your Graveyard. Once per turn, you can discard 1 random card from your opponent's hand. If the discarded card was a Spell or Trap Card, destroy this card, if the discarded card was a Monster Card, this card can attack twice during your Battle Phase. Rate,Fix {<-- Only if needed!}[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
guy22 Posted January 29, 2010 Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 the bigger description is cut off. it just goes "monster card, this card can". sorry, can't read the lore on the card so i don't have a clue Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bull3tM0nk3y Posted January 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 Sorry Fixed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted January 29, 2010 Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 OCG Fix:This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card gains 200 DEF for every Monster Card in your Graveyard. Once per turn, you can discard 1 random card from your opponent's hand. If the discarded card was a Spell or Trap Card, destroy this card, if the discarded card was a Monster Card, this card can attack twice during your Battle Phase. It's a very good picture, but it would be better off as a Machine-Type. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 29, 2010 Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 a shame this thing doesn't gain any atk, so it's weak for lv8 the effect isn't Oped, but I'd raise its base atk to 2400 instead 7.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bull3tM0nk3y Posted January 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 31, 2010 [spoiler=Fixed]• ATK went from 2000 to 2800• OCG Fixed• Card went from Warrior-Type to Machine-Type Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 31, 2010 Report Share Posted January 31, 2010 ok that makes it a lot better, now I can raise the rate to 8.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bull3tM0nk3y Posted January 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 31, 2010 Thanks dude! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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