My First Set

[Yugi-O]

 

so what do you think?

[ragnarok1945]

too many vanillas, ONE spell support isn't enough

 

for the fusion, 6550 atk is too much. The max base atk a monster can have is 5000

 

and its effect is OPed as hell anyway, there's no drawbacks for it

 

not to mention Divine Dragon isn't a real type

 

Dark and Phoenix Dragon have too much atk for vanillas. The absolute max atk a vanilla can have is 3000

 

3/10

[Guest Delinquent Girl NiAtSoFi]

The Rock says...

SWEET CREAM ON AN ICE CREAM CAKE!!! WHAT IN THE BLUE HELL ARE YOU DOING?

 

I say...

Overpowered. I can dump Phoenix with Trade-In for +2 cards, then play Birthright and have a 4000 ATKer.

 

No monster should EVER have over 5000 ATK, unless Konami makes a card with ATK higher than that, and even then, it needs a nasty drawback.

[Dante Dimercurio]

Picture: 8/10. I love the pictures. High quality. You should find a better backround for Full force, Phoenix dragon.

 

OCG: 7/10. Some simple beginner spelling mistakes, Not bad. The cards are overpowered for non-effect monsters. I have to admit very creative.

 

Total: 7.5/10, Very good for rookie.

[Masey 4 AVFC]

 

I know what's bean unleashed,a OP'ed dragon.Also,has nobody noticed the effect monsters have got vanilla descriptions?

[usetheforcehan]

for the fusion' date=' 6550 atk is too much. The [b']max base atk a monster can have is 5000[/b]

 

The absolute max atk a vanilla can have is 3000

 

The max ATK and DEF for a Monster Card is 9999 or just type Inf. The card's copy cannot hold a 5 digit number (well in theory they can. But the font size for the ATK and DEF must be reduced).

 

Also' date='has nobody noticed [b']the effect monsters have got vanilla descriptions?[/b]

 

I didn't notice until you mention it. :shock:

@Yugi-O, the Effect Monster cannot have a Story Descriptions and you can use a Spoiler Code for minimizing the post length.

 

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[darman05]

nice just a little Oped 8.5/10

[Menace13]

HORRIBLE. You get a GIRAFFE out of 10 points possible. Since GIRAFFE is not a number, you epic fail. First of all, no Normal Monster should have more than 3000 ATK or...well...3500 DEF? And that would be a Level 8 monster with like 500 ATK and 3500 DEF. ALL OF YOUR CARDS ARE OVERPOWERED. MAYBE PLAY A LITTLE YU-GI-OH BEFORE YOU MAKE CARDS! Level 5-6 Normal Monster ATK/DEF limit: 2500 ATK with 2000 or less DEF and 3000 DEF with 1000 ATK or less. Level 1-4 Normal Monster ATK/DEF limit: 2000 ATK with 500 or less DEF and 2100 DEF with 500 ATK or less. Really. You should try playing Yu-Gi-Oh! before you make cards. Now go away, I'm going to make some REAL cards.

[.:Shaymin:.]

To many vanillas

 

Overpowered card

 

Meh pics

 

6/10

[speck]

Interesting ideas if you want some help fixing your cards I'll help you, just PM me. 5.5/10 8)

[usetheforcehan]

HORRIBLE. You get a GIRAFFE out of 10 points possible. Since GIRAFFE is not a number' date=' you epic fail.[/b']

 

I LOL! :D

 

MAYBE PLAY A LITTLE YU-GI-OH BEFORE YOU MAKE CARDS!

Really. You should try playing Yu-Gi-Oh! before you make cards.

 

Menace is right. You should know Yugioh first.

•First, read the Comic/Manga.

•Second, play Yugioh "Power of Chaos" Games on PC (try Google + Torrent).

•Third, check the OCG's Tread ( http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-141678.html ).

•Fourth, create your card(s).

 

@Menace: Go easy on him. He/she is still newbie.

[Menace13]

@usetheforcehan: I put a different word in that first quote there every time somebody fails. I've done BLUE, ELEPHANT, and GIRAFFE so far. :P

 

At what you said about my second quote, I just want to say that at first, I started playing Yu-Gi-Oh! before knowing anything. I learned how to play by the manual that came in the Pegasus Starter Deck. I now have more than 1000 cards (probably) and WCs '08 and '09 as well as having memorized almost every year-old non-vanilla card. I made around 50 card with minimal OCG errors before looking at the OCG thread, and already knew almost everything on it. I made my first cards on loose paper 5 years ago; the worst one I made was called "You Lose, I Win" and the effect was "You win the duel. Your opponent loses the duel." Do these in this order to become a good duelist:

 

1. Play Yu-Gi-Oh!

2. Experiment with cards that are similar to other cards you have seen.

3. Make unique cards.

4. Post them and ask what people think of them.

5. FOLLOW THEIR ADVICE!

6. Become a better card maker.

 

Simple. I followed that and am already on my way to finishing a set of 80+ cards (I'm at around 62 ATM).

 

-Menace13

[Rusty Shovel]

HORRIBLE. You get a GIRAFFE out of 10 points possible. Since GIRAFFE is not a number' date=' you epic fail. First of all, no Normal Monster should have more than 3000 ATK or...well...3500 DEF? And that would be a Level 8 monster with like 500 ATK and 3500 DEF. ALL OF YOUR CARDS ARE OVERPOWERED. MAYBE PLAY A LITTLE YU-GI-OH BEFORE YOU MAKE CARDS! Level 5-6 Normal Monster ATK/DEF limit: 2500 ATK with 2000 or less DEF and 3000 DEF with 1000 ATK or less. Level 1-4 Normal Monster ATK/DEF limit: 2000 ATK with 500 or less DEF and 2100 DEF with 500 ATK or less. Really. You should try playing Yu-Gi-Oh! before you make cards. Now go away, I'm going to make some REAL cards.

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LOL.

[usetheforcehan]

@Menace: I do suggest to all Duelist to read the Manga though. In the Comic you'll know why Dark Magician & Blue-Eyes is good, and the background story of every created cards that Kazuki-san has made. ;)

[Menace13]

I'm too cheap to spend my money on the manga :P

[ragnarok1945]

for the fusion' date=' 6550 atk is too much. The [b']max base atk a monster can have is 5000[/b]

 

The absolute max atk a vanilla can have is 3000

 

The max ATK and DEF for a Monster Card is 9999 or just type Inf. The card's copy cannot hold a 5 digit number (well in theory they can. But the font size for the ATK and DEF must be reduced).

 

Also' date='has nobody noticed [b']the effect monsters have got vanilla descriptions?[/b]

 

I didn't notice until you mention it. :shock:

@Yugi-O, the Effect Monster cannot have a Story Descriptions and you can use a Spoiler Code for minimizing the post length.

 

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Example:

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I meant the max for a REALISTIC monster card in that aspect