jamora Posted January 29, 2010 Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 Effect: Tribute one card from your hand to summon one monster with "Blackwing" in it's name from your hand or deck. The Special Summoned monster cannot attack as long as your opponent controls a face-down monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted January 29, 2010 Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 Terrible OCG. Card image is a fail. And the effect is boring, and there are much better cards out there. 1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
guy22 Posted January 29, 2010 Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 you could have done better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jamora Posted January 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 what is wrong with the ocg??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted January 29, 2010 Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 The image is not that horrible. The only problem is that is black and white. Effect is too boring, as Lovely already said. <.< Rate - 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted January 29, 2010 Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 The OCG is just terrible your wording is bad. I can fix it. But you need to post the effect. Otherwise, I wont :[ since it'll be more work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jamora Posted January 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 i will amp it up a lil bit thenupdated Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted January 29, 2010 Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 Well, as the others said, the card is not that original and unique, and the effect is boring and short.It has OCG errors, but I'll fix them:Discard 1 card. Special Summon 1 "Blackwing" monster from your hand or Deck. That is how it should be. Can be OPed, since you only need to discard 1 card to get a monster to the field.You can add another efect to it like "The Special Summoned monster cannot attack as long as your opponent controls a face-up monster" Pic is not the best, but it looks like a monster that could be a "Blackwing" that rises (is Summoned) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jamora Posted January 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 well thank you and iv looked at the thread for the new ocg its the little parts that get me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted January 29, 2010 Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 OCG Fix:"Discard 1 card. Special Summon 1 "Blackwing" monster from your hand. The Special Summoned monster gains 1000 ATK." Now it's OP and dull. This card can be used to summon any blackwing includeing Sirocco and gives it 1000 ATK. This card needs a Drawback such as the one Tom offered. Or it should require more discarding for that effect. Also be imaginative. This card is boring and unoriginal. The pic (in my opinion) is still terrible. Even if you dont change it PLEASE get a BG for it. Anyways 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted January 29, 2010 Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 Imo you should add thast it cannot attack, that balances it out, if you make it unable to attack you can add 500 ATK boost, which won't make that big difference Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 29, 2010 Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 Bad OCG, overpowered...Rather sad..DXThe pic actually isn't bad..thats sad..DX Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jamora Posted January 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 fixed im not sher how to rendure pic yet Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 29, 2010 Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 Terrible OCG. Card image is a fail. And the effect is boring' date=' and there are much better cards out there. 1/10[/quote'] LLD, please. Don't stomp on members like that. It's too confidence crushing. The OCG isn't THAT horrible, just the effect is boring as hell 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jamora Posted January 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 30, 2010 lol i can take a stomp its ok just tell the truth and explain why and ill fix it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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