Guest Zeonark Posted January 30, 2010 Report Share Posted January 30, 2010 [align=center]Hell, I dunno. [spoiler=Lore]This monster cannot be Special Summoned unless it is placed on the top of your Deck by a card effect. Once per turn, You can send the top 3 cards of your Deck to the Graveyard to Special Summon 1 Level 5 or lower Machine-Type monster from your Graveyard. If this card is destroyed, you can place the monsters Special Summoned by this card's effect on the top of your Deck in any order. NEED NAME SUGGESTIONS. D: I got a little combo with this while I was thinking of it: Dump this into the Grave > Cyber Valley 3rd Effect > Special Summon this > Mill(Hopefully you'll get a good LS combo. >_>) > Get a decent Machine-Type out (Like...Cyber Dragon? Only one I can think of right now.) ...Bad combo is bad. OCG is quite...strange from me just reading over it again. Anyone care to fix it? Image Credit = HP Doom Oh and Icy, don't kill me. I wanted to see if I could do a card without you first reviewing it. D: Rate/Hate/Comment. Whatever.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted January 30, 2010 Report Share Posted January 30, 2010 Cool effect :]OCG seems fine, can't find any errors The Summoning part is very unique and the rest of the effect as wellFor name, I don't really know right now. "Rusty Scrap Protector" maybe (not the best) O: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 30, 2010 Report Share Posted January 30, 2010 Good work overall. Could be better, but, it's nice ;) I can't really see this as being used in a machine deck much, BUT, it does work pretty well ^_\\\ As Icy would say tho.."Forced synergy"..or something like that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 30, 2010 Report Share Posted January 30, 2010 not TOO hard to get onto the field the last effect might make it a little OPed though I'd change it to return the SS monsters back to your deck, then shuffle it 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted January 30, 2010 Report Share Posted January 30, 2010 Cool effect :]OCG seems fine' date=' can't find any errors The Summoning part is very unique and the rest of the effect as wellFor name, I don't really know right now. "Rusty Scrap Protector" maybe (not the best) O:[/quote'] Thanks. I tried really hard to be kinda original with some of it. >< ...Actually. Nice name. I might switch it to that. <3 Thanks. Good work overall. Could be better' date=' but, it's nice ;) I can't really see this as being used in a machine deck much, BUT, it does work pretty well ^_\\\ As Icy would say tho.."Forced synergy"..or something like that[/quote'] What does Forced Synergy mean though? D: not TOO hard to get onto the field the last effect might make it a little OPed though I'd change it to return the SS monsters back to your deck' date=' then shuffle it 8/10[/quote'] But that would be too common. D: If others say it's a bit OP'd, I'll change it. Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted January 30, 2010 Report Share Posted January 30, 2010 It is maybe not that useful in a Machine Deck, but I love it!And I almost don't know anything about Lightsworns O:So I can't say anything about that (but they are LIGHT, that's all I know) this is DARK:] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted January 30, 2010 Report Share Posted January 30, 2010 It is maybe not that useful in a Machine Deck' date=' but I love it!And I almost don't know anything about Lightsworns O:So I can't say anything about that (but they are LIGHT, that's all I know) this is DARK:'] ...Whoops.Maybe LIGHT would be better, even though there isn't any Light in this card. xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 30, 2010 Report Share Posted January 30, 2010 Keep it dark, lolLight would just be wierd.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted January 30, 2010 Report Share Posted January 30, 2010 Keep it dark' date=' lolLight would just be wierd..[/quote'] Lol. I only just saw this the second I edited the post with the LIGHT version. xD Kept to DARK. Name changed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted January 30, 2010 Report Share Posted January 30, 2010 Yes, keep it DARKDoes this support LS in a good way? :] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted January 30, 2010 Report Share Posted January 30, 2010 Yes' date=' keep it DARKDoes this support LS in a good way? :'] ...I think. LS focuses on milling your deck(AKA sending cards from your deck to the Graveyard). So I think this helps. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted January 30, 2010 Report Share Posted January 30, 2010 yes, then it would really help! With this card you get like 10 cards easily to the Graveyard :] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 30, 2010 Report Share Posted January 30, 2010 Yes' date=' keep it DARKDoes this support LS in a good way? :'] ...I think. LS focuses on milling your deck(AKA sending cards from your deck to the Graveyard). So I think this helps. Not really..as this card helps put cards back on top of the deck..wich LS don't really like to do..in any case..DX Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted January 30, 2010 Report Share Posted January 30, 2010 Yes' date=' keep it DARKDoes this support LS in a good way? :'] ...I think. LS focuses on milling your deck(AKA sending cards from your deck to the Graveyard). So I think this helps. Not really..as this card helps put cards back on top of the deck..wich LS don't really like to do..in any case..DX ...Err...Good point. Maybe this could act as a retreat thing? But you aren't Special Summoning LSs... ...Yep. I did it wrong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
archie17 Posted January 30, 2010 Report Share Posted January 30, 2010 Quite a few situational effects, but I guess you can use other cards to make it less situational. Overall an okay card 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 30, 2010 Report Share Posted January 30, 2010 Yes' date=' keep it DARKDoes this support LS in a good way? :'] ...I think. LS focuses on milling your deck(AKA sending cards from your deck to the Graveyard). So I think this helps. Not really..as this card helps put cards back on top of the deck..wich LS don't really like to do..in any case..DX ...Err...Good point. Maybe this could act as a retreat thing? But you aren't Special Summoning LSs... ...Yep. I did it wrong. Think of it as a first step to making Machines Teir 1...a rival to LS's ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted January 30, 2010 Report Share Posted January 30, 2010 Yes' date=' keep it DARKDoes this support LS in a good way? :'] ...I think. LS focuses on milling your deck(AKA sending cards from your deck to the Graveyard). So I think this helps. Not really..as this card helps put cards back on top of the deck..wich LS don't really like to do..in any case..DX ...Err...Good point. Maybe this could act as a retreat thing? But you aren't Special Summoning LSs... ...Yep. I did it wrong. Think of it as a first step to making Machines Teir 1...a rival to LS's ;) ...Oooooh~ I JUST GOT A ARCHETYPE PLAN. Thanks Yankee. ;D Now we can make broken Machines. <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neoshadow155 Posted January 30, 2010 Report Share Posted January 30, 2010 This is an OK card for Machine DecksI like the milling effectname...couldve done betterthe effect is fine no OCG errors (that i can see :P)Who knows i might even see you use these as a setOverall: 8.1/10 Pretty good...(Dang it >.< im using that pic for a card...o well XD) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 30, 2010 Report Share Posted January 30, 2010 Yes' date=' keep it DARKDoes this support LS in a good way? :'] ...I think. LS focuses on milling your deck(AKA sending cards from your deck to the Graveyard). So I think this helps. Not really..as this card helps put cards back on top of the deck..wich LS don't really like to do..in any case..DX ...Err...Good point. Maybe this could act as a retreat thing? But you aren't Special Summoning LSs... ...Yep. I did it wrong. Think of it as a first step to making Machines Teir 1...a rival to LS's ;) ...Oooooh~ I JUST GOT A ARCHETYPE PLAN. Thanks Yankee. ;D Now we can make broken Machines. <3 omg...Machine JD...o.0 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted January 30, 2010 Report Share Posted January 30, 2010 This is an OK card for Machine DecksI like the milling effectname...couldve done betterthe effect is fine no OCG errors (that i can see :P)Who knows i might even see you use these as a setOverall: 8.1/10 Pretty good...(Dang it >.< im using that pic for a card...o well XD) Thanks.Sorry about that. xD Just needed a pic. Yes' date=' keep it DARKDoes this support LS in a good way? :'] ...I think. LS focuses on milling your deck(AKA sending cards from your deck to the Graveyard). So I think this helps. Not really..as this card helps put cards back on top of the deck..wich LS don't really like to do..in any case..DX ...Err...Good point. Maybe this could act as a retreat thing? But you aren't Special Summoning LSs... ...Yep. I did it wrong. Think of it as a first step to making Machines Teir 1...a rival to LS's ;) ...Oooooh~ I JUST GOT A ARCHETYPE PLAN. Thanks Yankee. ;D Now we can make broken Machines. <3 omg...Machine JD...o.0 ...Now you scared me. o_o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
duel tester Posted January 30, 2010 Report Share Posted January 30, 2010 yeah this is great card!!!8.5/10mechasworn.....all dark machine deck millers.instant D.A.D!!!wulf!!!Chaos deck!!!this is the best deck idea EVER!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted January 30, 2010 Report Share Posted January 30, 2010 yeah this is great card!!!8.5/10mechasworn.....all dark machine deck millers.instant D.A.D!!!wulf!!!Chaos deck!!!this is the best deck idea EVER!!! ...That idea might be so ridiculous, it could work. Wait, DAD? ...A DAD support Archetype? Hmm... Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
duel tester Posted January 30, 2010 Report Share Posted January 30, 2010 heck even allys of justice cards would work with this card!! they are all machines all darks but they only kick ass against Worm monsters. shame......oh well..... as i was saying good job!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 30, 2010 Report Share Posted January 30, 2010 yeah this is great card!!!8.5/10mechasworn.....all dark machine deck millers.instant D.A.D!!!wulf!!!Chaos deck!!!this is the best deck idea EVER!!! ...That idea might be so ridiculous' date=' it could work. Wait, DAD? ...A DAD support Archetype? Hmm... Thanks.[/quote'] No..don't..DXYour going to add support to DAD..and/or make something as broken as LS? Thats just picking easy stuff XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted January 30, 2010 Report Share Posted January 30, 2010 yeah this is great card!!!8.5/10mechasworn.....all dark machine deck millers.instant D.A.D!!!wulf!!!Chaos deck!!!this is the best deck idea EVER!!! ...That idea might be so ridiculous' date=' it could work. Wait, DAD? ...A DAD support Archetype? Hmm... Thanks.[/quote'] No..don't..DXYour going to add support to DAD..and/or make something as broken as LS? Thats just picking easy stuff XD But DAD is nearly as broken as JD.What's the difference? D: But alright. The idea was tempting though. xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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