Inflamed Dragon

[speck]

This card can only be Special Summoned when there are 3 or more Dragon-Type monsters on your side of the field. Inflict 100 points of Damage to your opponents life points when this card is played. This effect Doubles During each of your Standby Phases. When your opponents life points reach 1 (They stop losing life by this cards effect) instead increase your life by the amount of Damage you would have inflicted by this cards effect.

[RAEGING D0GKING]

The effects are bad

If your opponent reaches 0 they do not lose ? Impossible

And when you have Summoned 3 Dragons you get to summon another one? Thats too easy

And what effect doubles since your opponent only loses 100 when the card is played

This card isnt good

 

Here use my Guide

[spoiler=Find the Image]

You can find suitable images on sites such as these...

 

http://www.deviantart.com/

http://photobucket.com/

http://wall.alphacoders.com/index.php?s=Fantasy&su=Warrior

http://www.wizards.com/magic/

http://www.thinktankstudios.com/creatures.html

http://www.animecubed.com/galleries/

http://www.animegalleries.net/

http://www.advancedanime.com/

http://www.animelab.com/anime.manga/pics/

Or even find images in the showcase section

Remember to CREDIT the Artists

 

For example I will choose this image

[spoiler=This one]

http://www.thinktankstudios.com/images/creatures/Finished/Stalkveng.jpg

 

Instead of saving it and uploading via a site, just right click the image, at the bottom of the menu that just appeared, it

 

should say something like copy image adress. Just copy and paste that in the picture upload box.

[spoiler=This is what card looks like so far]

 

Now we will go onto the next step

 

[spoiler=Details]

This category is about the name, type, attribute and idea for final effect.

 

Finding a good name;

Look at the picture of the card and try pointing out noticeable features, in the one I have chosen, you can see it is in a

 

graveyard, on a foreign alien planet and it is quite big, so this monster is a high level alien giant.

But for names, you can either make something like;

-The Frightening Beast

OR

-Skalashak, the Terrifying Beast

 

However I will choose the name Ladon, which is a greek mythological beast, and put some big scary words on the end

 

For its Attribute, look at the colours, elemental hints, or overall image. this is obviously a DARK monster.

 

Type can be harder, look for wings, swords, fins, fangs, fire, all these can be hints towards types, this card is a mix

 

between a Fiend and beast, but fiends are scarier and more evil, like this image.

 

It will look like this with most of it filled in.

 

[spoiler=Effect, ATK and DEF]

The effect should be based on image and name, try to match the name to the image, and effect to image and name.

 

For example, because of the Graveyard nearby, this would have some reviving effects.

 

Rough OCG plan:

-Special summon from graveyard with level 4 or less

-because of which must skip your next 2 draw phases

-and lose 500 ATK

 

OCG fixed up:

Pay 500 Life Points. Once per turn, during your Main Phase 1, you can Special Summon 1 level 4 or lower monster from your

 

Graveyard, if you do this, skip your next 2 Draw Phases.

 

That's the effect pretty much sorted out

 

If you need help with some OCG terms, go here:

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-51154.html

 

And for the ATK and DEF

Pretty simple this one, make sure its of a worthy balance and is looking appropriate for the card, don't OP or UP. A list of

 

average ATK and DEF stats.

1 : 300

2 : 600

3 : 1400

4 : 1800

5-6 : 2300

7-8 : 2800

9 : 3000

10+ : 4000

 

*there are exceptions to monster with higher ATK and DEF, but these often require huge tributes or costs, like "5 Header

 

Dragon"

The highest original ATK i have seen on a card is 5000

remember if a card has a certain Effect or has a Stat that is considerably high, lower the other drastically, eg:

ATK: 0 DEF:2200

ATK:1900 DEF: 0

ATK: 3000 DEF: 100

 

This card, because it loses 500 ATK, should have a considerably high original ATK, but not too high to still give it an

 

advantage, lets say 2800. Its DEF should be a lot lower because of the effect and its mainly an attacking monster. so about

 

300.

 

 

Tada a finished card. Once after a While you will make better cards.

 

 

Reps Aprreciated

 

 

Once your done with your card please PM it to me and I will tell you if you have improved.

[Where are my COOKIES]

Effect is bad. You can't reach 0 and still be playing.

4-10 (good pic)

[speck]

Allow me to clarify. yugioh cards can have whatever effects you want to give them, and I don't now if you've ever heard of "Dark Snake Syndrome" (It's a REAL YUGIOH card) and it has about the same effect, only you and your opponent both lose 100 life points when it's played, and it continues to double every turn after that. I suppose I could make it 1 life point, instead of 0, however the idea is that once their life points reach 0 or 1 you begin to increase your own life by whatever amount you would have inflicted to your opponent by this effect. (They stop losing life by this cards effect.) It still continues to double, that means it starts at 100 and goes 200, 400, 800, 1600, 3200, 6400, ect... I tell you all what, for the sake of argument I will make it 1 life point instead of 0. Happy? 8)

[Azra The Soulslayer]

Even so, what about other ways of damaging? Your card says that it increases your life points by the damage you would have dealt from this cards effect, but lets say you attack with oh...Vorse Raider? 1900 damage would be dealt, so the opponent would still be defeated, unless you clarify that the life point increasing ability works for all damage. Even so the card could work against you because even with your life points increasing your opponent could reduce them to 0, or you could risk decking out from lack of progress in the duel. Your opponent could deck out as well but i wouldn't really use a card that has that high of a gamble. I give it 4/10, good pic. Try using better OCG and adjusting the effect a little, in my opinion.

[speck]

Even so' date=' what about other ways of damaging? Your card says that it increases your life points by the damage you would have dealt from this cards effect, but lets say you attack with oh...Vorse Raider? 1900 damage would be dealt, so the opponent would still be defeated, unless you clarify that the life point increasing ability works for all damage. Even so the card could work against you because even with your life points increasing your opponent could reduce them to 0, or you could risk decking out from lack of progress in the duel. Your opponent could deck out as well but i wouldn't really use a card that has that high of a gamble. I give it 4/10, good pic. Try using better OCG and adjusting the effect a little, in my opinion.

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Misunderstanding.... I'm just say you can't actually kill them with this effect. They can still die a thousand other ways. 8)

[Dante Dimercurio]

Picture: 10/10. Perfect quality.

 

OCG: 10/10. Effect makes sense to me, I don't know about the other guys.

 

Total: 10/10 GOOD JOB! :)

[speck]

Picture: 10/10. Perfect quality.

 

OCG: 10/10. Effect makes sense to me' date=' I don't know about the other guys.

 

Total: 10/10 GOOD JOB! :)

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Thanks for understanding it's effect. :D

[chrid97]

okay but i dont understand y would u want 2 contuine the duel if he already lost?? It may make sense but at the same time it doesnt

[Dante Dimercurio]

Picture: 10/10. Perfect quality.

 

OCG: 10/10. Effect makes sense to me' date=' I don't know about the other guys.

 

Total: 10/10 GOOD JOB! :)

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Thanks for understanding it's effect. :D

 

Your welcome, it is very obvious, why don't they understand it?

[Aibara]

I like the image. I think that you should:

Firstly: change the effect.(0LP=you lose the duel)

Secondly:give this card ATK=2400 and 6Levels.

And the last tip: keep on improving and posting your cards!!!!

[speck]

It no longer says (0) Now it says (1) and it stays just like it is. 8)

[Where are my COOKIES]

Allow me to clarify. yugioh cards can have whatever effects you want to give them' date=' and I don't now if you've ever heard of "Dark Snake Syndrome" (It's a REAL YUGIOH card) and it has about the same effect, only you and your opponent both lose 100 life points when it's played, and it continues to double every turn after that. I suppose I could make it 1 life point, instead of 0, however the idea is that once their life points reach 0 or 1 you begin to increase your own life by whatever amount you would have inflicted to your opponent by this effect. (They stop losing life by this cards effect.) It still continues to double, that means it starts at 100 and goes 200, 400, 800, 1600, 3200, 6400, ect... I tell you all what, for the sake of argument I will make it 1 life point instead of 0. Happy? 8)

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You know what? That's fair.

[.:Shaymin:.]

Good Effect (But not the best)

 

Good pic

 

Minor OCG

 

8.5/10