Other cards of my MC set

[Neo-MasterX]

These cards will not get into my Mystic Creature Set until I got a rating and an OCG fix. So please help me!

 

Lore:

This card is used to Ritual Summon "Tyrona". You must also Tribute monsters from the field or your hand whose total Levels equal 9 or more.

 

Lore:

This monster can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Countdown to the Apocalypse". You must also offer monsters whose total Level Stars equal 9 or more as a Tribute from the field or your hand. As long as this card remains face-up on the field both players have to pay 500 Life Points to declare an attack. This cards ATK equal to your opponents Life Points.

[Guest JoshIcy]

Currently all new Ritual Spells include a Graveyard effect. And that card is just NASTY.

Combine it with 3x toll (lol fun idea) for your opponent to pay 2500lp to attack. And you must have a way to clarify its ATK otherwise it's just 0/0.

 

Overpowered card btw =X. With current ritual support you can effectively have a Lock on your opponent. (Though the lvl9 thing leaves that up to the person, I think it's teetering more towards overpowered).

[-Griffin]

"This card cannot be destroyed." a clause I never like to see. It feels like you could just throw some burn in with this and they'd likely never be able to attack, or otherwise win.

[Jolta]

"This card cannot be destroyed."

 

Yeah! I like that.

 

Paying LP to declare an Attack makes it OK IMO.

 

Well' date=' I think you [i']may[/i] die with this kard.

[Neo-MasterX]

Things that were updated:

1- Damage taken updated to 500;

2- Opponents Life Points connected to ATK points;

3- DEF points updated to 3000;

4- "This card cannot be destroyed" removed;

 

Can someone propose me to update other things?

[ragnarok1945]

for Tyrona the 500 LP pay to attack is just fine

 

I'm unsure if you should make the atk determining effect to your opponent's LP. Makes it OPed as hell early game

 

7/10

[Neo-MasterX]

for Tyrona the 500 LP pay to attack is just fine

 

I'm unsure if you should make the atk determining effect to your opponent's LP. Makes it OPed as hell early game

 

7/10

 

And how I should make it?

GIVE ME TIPS!!!

[Lexadin]

First it is Tribute not Offer.

Second, if you just give her a set ATK, it would be fine.

Pic's are ok.

A 7/10 now.