Gascan Posted January 31, 2010 Report Share Posted January 31, 2010 UPDATEFirst of all, here's the original post with the original card. [spoiler=[b]Original Post[/b]]New Machine card, chek it owt guise: Help with my OCG here would be terrific, I know it's a disaster. I edited the wording to a mildly revised version of superspeck's suggestion, which I think kind of works better than how I had it. Here's the card with the new wording: Again, constructive comments would be super. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
superspeck Posted January 31, 2010 Report Share Posted January 31, 2010 Your OCG is not that bad what I whould do is. Once per turn, you can sacrifice one Machine-type monster on your side of the field to special summon one level 4 or lower machine-type monster from your opponent"s Graveyard to your side of the field. just an idea Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dante Dimercurio Posted January 31, 2010 Report Share Posted January 31, 2010 Not bad. I don't see any serious problems.. Very nice. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
speck Posted February 1, 2010 Report Share Posted February 1, 2010 Looks good, like the effect!! 8.5/10 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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