Pegasus24 Posted February 1, 2010 Report Share Posted February 1, 2010 My second attempt at a set. It's only 1 card so far, but I'm working on it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shinzuku Posted February 1, 2010 Report Share Posted February 1, 2010 Picture is VERY blurry, fix it. Ocg seems decent. and I'd increase his ATK to 1600 just to even things out. Overall. 7.3/10 not bad.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Breakaway Posted February 1, 2010 Report Share Posted February 1, 2010 For a new guy not bad not bad at all let me correct your OCG As long as you control a Beast-Type monster, this card cannot be selected as an attack target. If a Beast-Type monster you control is selected as the target of a Spell or Trap card, negate the activation of that card and destroy it. But its OPed i would have a cost for the negate part like pay 600 Life Points or Discard a card 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pegasus24 Posted February 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 1, 2010 Tis fixed, 1500 seems more fair. Thanks for the feedback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raphidra Posted February 1, 2010 Report Share Posted February 1, 2010 Blurry pic sux... Effect is ok, not great though. And OCG seems bad, it should be "(...)this card cannot be selected as an attack target." instead of "(...)this card cannot be the target of an attack.". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pegasus24 Posted February 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 1, 2010 For a new guy not bad not bad at all let me correct your OCG As long as you control a Beast-Type monster' date=' this card cannot be selected as an attack target. If a Beast-Type monster you control is selected as the target of a Spell or Trap card, negate the activation of that card and destroy it. But its OPed i would have a cost for the negate part like pay 600 Life Points or Discard a card 8/10[/quote'] Perhaps, perhaps. I'll give it some thought. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Breakaway Posted February 1, 2010 Report Share Posted February 1, 2010 It would make it less OPed or none at all Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pegasus24 Posted February 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 1, 2010 Keep in mind though, that that spell and trap card effect, applies to YOUR spell and trap cards as well, so you can't use any spell or trap card that targets your own beasts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Breakaway Posted February 1, 2010 Report Share Posted February 1, 2010 Then use thisAs long as you control a Beast-Type monster, this card cannot be selected as an attack target. If a Beast-Type monster you control is selected as the target of a Spell or Trap card, you can discard 1 card to negate the activation of that card and destroy it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pegasus24 Posted February 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 1, 2010 Hmmm.... that'll work. Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pegasus24 Posted February 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 1, 2010 Noble Herdsman added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 1, 2010 Report Share Posted February 1, 2010 both card pics look blurry Lord of Beasts needs a drawback to balance it out It's supposed to start off "When this card is successfully Normal Summoned" (for the 2nd card) 7.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pegasus24 Posted February 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 1, 2010 I don't think the first one's that blurry. The second one... blargh, unfortunately your right, but I can't find a decent elephant picture that's not a photo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DigiMaster Ragnarok Posted February 1, 2010 Report Share Posted February 1, 2010 2nd pic i hve no idea wats goin on with the pic, but besides that pretty good. 1st card: 8.5/102nd card: 7.5/10Overall: 8/10 good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pegasus24 Posted February 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 Gaia added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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