Evil United (New set). 8/?? New Card Added.

[AHumanNumber]

I may need a lot of help with OCG, i'm fairly poor at it.

 

The Art is credited and belongs to their respective artists.

 

Card Lore:

If this card is in your hand, reveal it to your opponent. If a card is sent from your hand to the Graveyard while this card is in your hand, you gain 500 Life Points. If this card is sent from your hand to the Graveyard, gain 1000 lifepoints. During your Battle Phase flip a coin, if it comes up heads this card is sent to the graveyard without activating it's effect.

 

 

 

Card Lore:

During your Battle Phase you can pay 500 lifepoints to switch the ATK and DEF of this card. During your Battle Phase you can pay 500 Life Points to increase the ATK of this card by 500. During your Standby Phase reset this cards ATK to 0 and DEF to 1500

 

 

 

Card Lore:

During your End Phase, if you lost Life Points due to the effect of a monster you control, you can discard a card, if you do you gain 1000 Life Points. During your Standby Phase pay 500 lifepoints, if you don't or can't destroy this card and lose 500 Life Points.

 

 

 

Card Lore:

Once per turn, If another monster you control is the target for an Attack you can switch the Attack target to this card. If this card is the target of an Attack you gain 500 Life Points. If this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard by battle you lose 500 Life Points. If this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard by a card effect you gain 500 Life Points.

 

 

 

Card Lore:

During your Battle Phase you can discard a card, if you do deal 500 points of damage to your opponents Life Points. During the End Phase of the turn this card was Normal Summoned or Special Summoned, controller of this card loses 500 Life Points. Each time this card Attacks, you lose 500 Life Points.

 

 

 

Card Lore:

This card cannot be Special Summoned. You can Normal Summon this card without a Tribute, if you do the ATK of this card becomes 0. During your Battle Phase you can pay 500 Life Points to switch this card to the Defense Position. You may Tribute two monsters to Summon this card, if you do increase the Attack of this card by 1000.

 

 

 

Card Lore:

This card cannot be Special Summoned or Set. This card can only be Tribute Summoned. During your Battle Phase reveal up to 2 cards in your hand thats names contains "E.U", if you don't at least reveal 1 send this card to the Graveyard and lose 1000 Life Points. Put one "Visk" counter on this card for each card revealed using this card's effect. During the Battle Phase remove 2 "Visk" couners from this card and choose a monster card on the field, in your hand, or in your Graveyard and gain it's effect for this turn.

 

 

 

Card Lore:

This card cannot be the target of an Attack. This card cannot Declare an Attack. Once per turn you can Negate an Attack targeting a Monster whose name contains "Otherside". Once per turn you can pay 500 Life Points to Negate an Attack targeting a Monster you control. Once per game you can Negate a spell or trap card and destroy it. If this card is Destroyed by a card effect you lose 1000 Life Points.

 

[ragnarok1945]

combat phase should be Battle Phase

 

there's capitalization errors

 

lifepoints should be Life Points

 

change may to can

 

for Vera, you shouldn't have made the 1000 atk boost a permanent one

 

7.8/10

[AHumanNumber]

I'll make those changes right away but to explain the permanent atk increase for Vera, since it only gets the increase if you tribute two monsters, it's basically a 7 star monster if you choose to make it one. 2900 atk isn't unreasonable for a 7 stars.

 

Thanks for the help on the ocg.

[Dargon_Lexor]

Alistair words in the pic

[AHumanNumber]

Alistair's pic is fixed.

[AHumanNumber]

Added another card.

[ragnarok1945]

there's some weird wording on the OCG, but I'll leave that aside

 

for Roa, negating a spell or trap and destroying it shouldn't be limited to just once per duel, too rare

 

8/10

[AHumanNumber]

I'll look it over and attempt to re-word it.

 

The reason i did that was becuase of his other negating effects, thought it would be too cheap to just have him negating everything. Though i'll considering it, maybe make it a payment. Maybe i'll make it so the "pay 500 to negate an attack" is an either or with "pay 500 to nagate spell or trap".

 

Thanks for the input, you're always helpful.

[~ŠhaĐowŁeĞenĐ~]

nice cards, nice effects, great pics. 9.7/10

[DigiMaster Ragnarok]

Still problems with ocg, pics are okay but look for better ones is wat i suggest.

 

Effects r okay but not quite there yet. set needs work

 

5/10

 

"Meh"