We are more often treacherous through weakness than through calculation.

[Dissonance]

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This card can only be equipped to a Spellcaster-Type monster. When a non-Zombie-Type monster is destroyed by battle with a Zombie-Type monster, Special Summon the destroyed monster to your field with half it's original ATK and DEF, and treat it as a Zombie-Type monster. When the equipped monster would be destroyed, pay 1000 Life Points to keep it on the field.[/align]

[chuerta6]

nice card 9/10

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

You have a few OCG errors that I can fix if you want.

 

This card is OP.

 

You can equip Endymion with this card and keep destroying ANY monster and be able to Special Summon them to your field. This only works if it has some sort of drawback which it doesn't. Cards such as REZD are balanced because they are limited to only Zombie monsters, which makes it useless without Zombie World. This card's only limit is Zombie monsters which means it's reverse of REZD, Zombie World is it's weakness. But it's a rare card to be played these days so this card has virtually no limits and even with Zombie world, you can easily use other equip spells to convert opponent monsters to any other type. And since there is no limit to how many times a turn you can negate the destruction of the equipped monster, it's virtually immortal. This OP's this card alot as you can simply play Spell Economic's to negate the LP pay.

 

Also the pic needs Cropping >>

[Dissonance]

Cropping a pic is more effort than I care to commit to this card.

 

Card edited.

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

I can crop it ? Only if you want though but it doesn't really matter v.v i just felt like addressing it o.O

 

Now then : ....No editations o.o

[Dissonance]

I can crop it ? Only if you want though but it doesn't really matter v.v i just felt like addressing it o.O

 

Now then : ....No editations o.o

 

I posted then edited.

 

I honestly don't care. I have the ability to crop, I just don't want to have to go through the hassle of saving the pic to my computer.

 

So give me a url I can use in the upload box on the editor, and sure.

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

Lol well if you dont care I may just leave it be ^^. I honestly dont care either just felt like pointing it out.

 

Now : As to OCG:

"This card can only be equipped to a Spellcaster-Type monster. When a non-Zombie-Type monster is destroyed by battle with a Zombie-Type monster, it is Special Summoned to your side of the field with half its original ATK and DEF and it is treated as a Zombie-Type monster. When the equipped monster would be destroyed, you can pay 1000 Life Points instead."

 

The bold is corrections and the underline is "or something like that".

 

This is better. The increased LP pay makes it more balanced since you'll have to limit yourself or else lose. Although this card still be negated by Spell Economic but you also have it so that just the Zombie monster can activate the "snatch" effect.

 

Congrats 8/10

[Dissonance]

OCG is convoluted and pointless. I'm pretty sure at Konami there IS not OCG. They just go with whatever they please. I've seen cards that say "your field" and cards that say "your side of the field"

 

Capitalize this, word this that way, it's all stupid.

 

*Although that should say "you can pay", I don't know how that got left out.

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

I believe Konami actually does go over OCG, they update it and they use the same types of OCG for cards they don't really change it up at all.

 

But! That's irrelevent.

 

You could have just stuck with 600 LP pay and just slipped in a limit to the amount of times that piece can be activated a turn.

[Rusty Shovel]

Should the OCG not be this?

 

This card can only be equipped to a Spellcaster-Type monster. When a non-Zombie-Type monster is destroyed as a result of battle by a Zombie-Type monster, Special Summon the destroyed monster to your field halve it's ATK and DEF, and treat it as a Zombie-Type monster. When the equipped monster would be destroyed, you may pay 1000 Life Points instead.

 

 

OCG is convoluted and pointless. I'm pretty sure at Konami there IS not OCG. They just go with whatever they please. I've seen cards that say "your field" and cards that say "your side of the field"

 

To a very little extent this is true, there card's OCG vary by when they were made. Unluckily there is OCG, so live with it.

[ragnarok1945]

LLD already helped you on the card improvements

 

the OCG for the most part is fine, and Rusty already pointed out most of the errors anyway

 

8/10