inFAMOUS cole Posted February 2, 2010 Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 all righty then i have updated all ocg except terror of night and changed the pic for were manand i will be adding more when i get the chance so just hold tight cuz im trying to perfect them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Shaymin:. Posted February 2, 2010 Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 Dont post double cards OCG Errors 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
inFAMOUS cole Posted February 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 yea i fixed it there was an accident Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon™ Posted February 2, 2010 Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 Let's see, I wanna be like Icy so I'm not going to fix the OCG just the playability 'n stuff. Most of the card's effects are too plain; add some more. (Some have no effect at all, I'm not protesting vanillas but for a small set I don't reccomend them.) I guess the playability is fair, and I won't rate it either. I follow new principles in commenting. Overall, an OK set, the OCG is off-but that doesn't matter. Try to improve on what I said and you'll get much better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
inFAMOUS cole Posted February 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 Let's see' date=' I wanna be like Icy so I'm not going to fix the OCG just the playability 'n stuff. Most of the card's effects are too plain; add some more. (Some have no effect at all, I'm not protesting vanillas but for a small set I don't reccomend them.) I guess the playability is fair, and I won't rate it either. I follow new principles in commenting. Overall, an OK set, the OCG is off-but that doesn't matter. Try to improve on what I said and you'll get much better.[/quote'] but i didnt have any vannilaand do u have suggestions on more cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon™ Posted February 2, 2010 Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 Nah, what I mean by vanilla is the Fusion one, it has no effect therefore partially classified as vanilla. Also, you need better pics. Go to Showcase forum section and look for Image Archives and you can get good pics there. Maybe make one Beast-Type monster that deals with the Graveyard and having more ATK and DEF than other cards; somewhat boosting it. Remember to add something balancing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
inFAMOUS cole Posted February 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 i have just the picture and the thought i ll post as soon as im done Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twin Seed Posted February 2, 2010 Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 Card one:"When your opponent declares an attack on a Beast-Type monster you control, pay 300 Life Points to negate it."-Plain-Overpowered; add a bigger drawback Card two:"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by ____________ while "Night of the Full Moon" is face-up on your field."-Plain-Missing how to summon it-Divine Card three:"While this card is face-up on your field, increase the ATK of all Beast-Type monsters you control by 500."-Plain-Blury pic Card four:"FLIP: Pay 300 Life Points. Select 1 monster in your Graveyard and Special Summon it to your side of the field."-Plain-Bad pic; no background, blury, and I think there're lines on it-Overpowered; add a bigger draw back and limit on the card(ex: 1 Level 4 or lower monster) Card five:-Perfect OCG-Severely plain; add an effect Card six:"Equip this card to a Warrior-Type monster you control. It is treated as a Beast-Type monster."-Plain-Blury pic Btw, OCG = Official/Original Card Grammar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon™ Posted February 2, 2010 Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 Card one:"When your opponent declares an attack on a Beast-Type monster you control' date=' pay 300 Life Points to negate it."-Plain-Overpowered; add a bigger drawback Card two:"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned [b']by[/b] ____________ while "Night of the Full Moon" is face-up on your field."-Plain-Missing how to summon it-Divine Card three:"While this card is face-up on your field, increase the ATK of all Beast-Type monsters you control by 500."-Plain-Blury pic Card four:"FLIP: Pay 300 Life Points. Select 1 monster in your Graveyard and Special Summon it to your side of the field."-Plain-Bad pic; no background, blury, and I think there're lines on it-Overpowered; add a bigger draw back and limit on the card(ex: 1 Level 4 or lower monster) Card five:-Perfect OCG-Severely plain; add an effect Card six:"Equip this card to a Warrior-Type monster you control. It is treated as a Beast-Type monster."-Plain-Blury pic Btw, OCG = Official/Original Card Grammar That is some good information for you, inFAMOUS cole. One thing, Dark Justice, don't be so negative. You just fixed everything. He might learn to do the OCG in the future, but he has no confidence for you therefore the comment isn't completely viable. I'm not arguing with you or anything just saying. I agree with Dark Justice with the OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SuperNarb Posted February 2, 2010 Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 Big Ocg errors, and the effects, for ALL of them are bland, you really need to put more effort into every part about this card. 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twin Seed Posted February 2, 2010 Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 Wrath: I'm not being negative; I'm pointing out the mistakes only, yes, but only so that he can fix them and learn from it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
inFAMOUS cole Posted February 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 cmon guys dont fight i appreciate the help dark justice and awesome pic by the way Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twin Seed Posted February 2, 2010 Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 We're not fighting, I'm just simply explaining that I'm only trying to help. And what pic are you talking about? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
inFAMOUS cole Posted February 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 the one next to yuor name Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twin Seed Posted February 2, 2010 Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 Oh, my avi, thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 2, 2010 Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 1st card pic is overused all the card effects are way too short and dull, add more effects to them 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
inFAMOUS cole Posted February 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 1st card pic is overused all the card effects are way too short and dull' date=' add more effects to them 5/10[/quote'] could u show me some threads with that pic in it cuz in all of my 3 or 4 profiles of being here(don't ask) i have never seen this pic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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