Hatsu, The Obnoxious Samurai

[TOMY_25]

MY first created card...

Image credits to blazepius from Deviantart...

 

[Donquixote Doflamingo]

Plain but nice effect. Nice pic. Good idea 7/10

[TOMY_25]

Plain but nice effect. Nice pic. Good idea 7/10

 

Thanks. This is my first time...

[ragnarok1945]

not bad for a first card

 

effect a little bit on the bland end, but it's still balanced and the OCG is fine

 

8/10

[TOMY_25]

not bad for a first card

 

effect a little bit on the bland end' date=' but it's still balanced and the OCG is fine

 

8/10

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thanks!

[Frybread002]

Well I liked the pic, and the effect is pretty solid, but there's a problem with it's effect though.....

[Cowsmacker]

nice card for first time. 7.5/10

[Yoko Kurama]

Simple yet i don't see much use in the effect unless whatever is going into your graveyard effects another card. 6.8/10

[Menace13]

not bad for a first card

 

effect a little bit on the bland end' date=' but it's still balanced and the OCG is fine

 

8/10

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I feel like hurting you right now.

 

THIS CARD IS EPIC FOR A FIRST CARD! The only things I would do to make it better would be raise its ATK by 100 and lower the DEF by 300 and change the effect to:

 

"When this card is Summoned successfully, you can send one EARTH monster from your Deck to your Graveyard."

 

Do that and this gets a 13/10 (the best rating I give, as it has the epic number 13 in it). Otherwise it sticks at 9.9/10 :P

[Yoko Kurama]

not bad for a first card

 

effect a little bit on the bland end' date=' but it's still balanced and the OCG is fine

 

8/10

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I feel like hurting you right now.

 

THIS CARD IS EPIC FOR A FIRST CARD! The only things I would do to make it better would be raise its ATK by 100 and lower the DEF by 300 and change the effect to:

 

"When this card is Summoned successfully, you can send one EARTH monster from your Deck to your Graveyard."

 

Do that and this gets a 13/10 (the best rating I give, as it has the epic number 13 in it). Otherwise it sticks at 9.9/10 :P

quite a f'd up scale then...my first card maybe just maybe had an effect that was beneficial. well hes new so no harm done criticizing he needs it for later.

[TOMY_25]

not bad for a first card

 

effect a little bit on the bland end' date=' but it's still balanced and the OCG is fine

 

8/10

[/quote']

 

I feel like hurting you right now.

 

THIS CARD IS EPIC FOR A FIRST CARD! The only things I would do to make it better would be raise its ATK by 100 and lower the DEF by 300 and change the effect to:

 

"When this card is Summoned successfully, you can send one EARTH monster from your Deck to your Graveyard."

 

Do that and this gets a 13/10 (the best rating I give, as it has the epic number 13 in it). Otherwise it sticks at 9.9/10 :P

 

Thanks Menace13 for such compliments. I'll change it.

 

quite a f'd up scale then...my first card maybe just maybe had an effect that was beneficial. well hes new so no harm done criticizing he needs it for later.

 

That's OK.I would accept any comments positively.

[Kingdom Xathers]

This one can actually be useful if used right. Nice job. 8-3

[TOMY_25]

This one can actually be useful if used right. Nice job. 8-3

 

Thanks!

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Done! Changed it.