Jace Beleren Posted February 2, 2010 Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 [align=center] Equip only to a level 2 or lower Dark Attribute monster you control, the equipped monster gains 2500 ATK. During each of your Standby phases decrease the equipped monster ATK by 1000. When the equipped monster ATK reaches 0, remove from play the equipped monster to return this card to the top of your Deck.[/align] as usual.......rate and comment OCG Fix are appriactied Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted February 2, 2010 Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 OCG fix~ (With some modifications) Equip only to a DARK monster you control with 900 ATK or less. The equipped monster gains 2000 ATK. During each of your Standby phases decrease the equipped monster ATK by 1000. When the equipped monster ATK reaches 0, you can remove from play the equipped monster to return this card to the top of your Deck. 3000 ATK was a little much, so I reduced it to 2000 and added a new effect that can return that card to the top of your Deck. For now, only 8.2/10, because it could be really over powered and with a little 3-D picture. The picture is not bad, but it is not a image that I would use. With the changes, I give you 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted February 2, 2010 Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 Well 900 + 3000 = 3900, so it is ballenced enough for me.Pic is very... Intersting.Effect is simple and supports the 'DARK" theme.A 8.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jace Beleren Posted February 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 OCG fix~ (With some modifications) Equip only to a DARK monster you control with 900 ATK or less. The equipped monster gains 2000 ATK. During each of your Standby phases decrease the equipped monster ATK by 1000. When the equipped monster ATK reaches 0' date=' you can remove from play the equipped monster to return this card to the top of your Deck.[/i'] 3000 ATK was a little much, so I reduced it to 2000 and added a new effect that can return that card to the top of your Deck. For now, only 8.2/10, because it could be really over powered and with a little 3-D picture. The picture is not bad, but it is not a image that I would use. With the changes, I give you 9/10. ok i made some fixes on this card to make it more balanced rate and comment peoples Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted February 2, 2010 Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 Better now. Rate - 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jace Beleren Posted February 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 Well 900 + 3000 = 3900' date=' so it is ballenced enough for me.Pic is very... Intersting.Effect is simple and supports the 'DARK" theme.A 8.7/10[/quote'] thanx for your comment and ratings Better now. Rate 9/10 thanx :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Ryder Posted February 2, 2010 Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 OCG fix~ (With some modifications) Equip only to a DARK monster you control with 900 ATK or less. The equipped monster gains 2000 ATK. During each of your Standby Phases decrease the equipped monsters ATK by 1000. When the equipped monsters ATK reaches/is reduced to 0' date=' you can remove from play the equipped monster to return this card to the top of your Deck.[/i'] 3000 ATK was a little much, so I reduced it to 2000 and added a new effect that can return that card to the top of your Deck. For now, only 8.2/10, because it could be really over powered and with a little 3-D picture. The picture is not bad, but it is not a image that I would use. With the changes, I give you 9/10.Just made the last fixes. Forward slash is either for you to choose. Too bad for me the card won't show up, can be overpowered though (pointed out already). For now, 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jace Beleren Posted February 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 if u look at the first you will see that i had edited the card lore before u fix the OCG anyways thanx for your comment cmon Peoples i want more comment and you may get a rep :d Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Ryder Posted February 2, 2010 Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 I cannot see the card. It doesn't show up for me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jace Beleren Posted February 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 just try to refresh the thread..........i can see the pic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Ryder Posted February 2, 2010 Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 I refreshed before I even commented on this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jace Beleren Posted February 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 I refreshed before I even commented on this. well it works with me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted February 2, 2010 Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 OCG Fix: (This is a fix with Recent OCG) "Equip only to a level 2 or lower DARKAttribute monster you control. The equipped monster gains 2500 ATK. During each of your Standby Phases decreasethe equipped monster loses 1000 ATK. When the equipped monster ATK reaches 0, remove from play the equipped monster to return this card to the top of your Deck." That's good :3 It's great and balanced. It's effect is super usefull for both effect DARK monsters and Normal DARK monsters. Love ^^ 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jace Beleren Posted February 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 OCG Fix: (This is a fix with Recent OCG) "Equip only to a level 2 or lower DARKAttribute monster you control. The equipped monster gains 2500 ATK. During each of your Standby Phases decreasethe equipped monster loses 1000 ATK. When the equipped monster ATK reaches 0' date=' remove from play the equipped monster to return this card to the top of your Deck." That's good :3 It's great and balanced. It's effect is super usefull for both effect DARK monsters and Normal DARK monsters. Love ^^ 9/10[/quote'] thanx for the OCG fix CCi am glad that u liked it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 3, 2010 Report Share Posted February 3, 2010 DARK monster, not Dark Attribute monster rest of the OCG errors have been pointed out already 2500 atk boost is just too much, even with the 1000 atk drain. I'd make it only 2000 atk boost instead 8.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitty Posted February 3, 2010 Report Share Posted February 3, 2010 Good card Kira 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jace Beleren Posted February 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 3, 2010 Good card Kira 8/10 thanx for your comment Kitty Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Ryder Posted February 3, 2010 Report Share Posted February 3, 2010 OCG Fix: (This is a fix with Recent OCG) "Equip only to a level 2 or lower DARKAttribute monster you control. The equipped monster gains 2500 ATK. During each of your Standby Phases decreasethe equipped monster loses 1000 ATK. When the equipped monster ATK reaches 0' date=' remove from play the equipped monster to return this card to the top of your Deck." That's good :3 It's great and balanced. It's effect is super usefull for both effect DARK monsters and Normal DARK monsters. Love ^^ 9/10[/quote']the loses bit is new right? Yeah, the decreased bit is correct too. But I prefer lose bit. The arguments of OCG... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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