Parion555 Posted February 2, 2010 Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 This card is not affected by the effects of "Blackwing" cards.There cannot be more than two "Blackwing" monsters on the field.Once per turn,if a "Blackwing" monster's effect is activated,you can tribiute one monster on your side of the field to negate the effect and destroy that monster.While this card is in face-up Defense Position, there cannot be 3 or more "Blackwing" monsters on the field. If there are 3 or more "Blackwing" monsters on the field,your opponent selects and destroys one of them.If you change this card's Battle Position,you cannot change this card's Battle Position until your next Standby Phase, except with a card effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazin Kay Posted February 2, 2010 Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 This is... Chun Li. ... How long have you been making cards? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parion555 Posted February 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 I'm sorry about the picture,i was in a hurry,and i couldn't find another picture...and again really sorry abou the pic,i'll change it right away. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazin Kay Posted February 2, 2010 Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 Christ, you sound like I'll cut your balls off if you mess up like that. Easy up, bro. Chill. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parion555 Posted February 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 Is this better?No i just want it to have a good picture that's all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted February 2, 2010 Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 Pic's ok.OCG slightly of.Effect is very effective against Blackwings but ballenced becouse it is usseles without.A 7.6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Cursed Reaction Posted February 2, 2010 Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 That is complete death for Blackwing monsters. Only 2 Blackwing monsters on the field is extremely powerful. Add a drawback. Otherwise, I like the card. 7.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parion555 Posted February 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 I would make a drawback but i can't think of any,if you have any ideas just tell them and i'll add them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Cursed Reaction Posted February 2, 2010 Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 How about decreasing its DEF then saying that:'While this card is face-up in Defense Position, there cannot be 3 or more "Blackwing" monsters on the field. If there are 3 or more "Blackwing" monsters on the field, your opponent selects and destroys one of them. If you change this card's Battle Position, you cannot change this card's Battle Position until your next Standby Phase, except with a card effect"This way, you could turn it into a nuke-like card destroying lots of Blackwings on the field but has a Goblin Attack Force-like drawback. Or you could make it a Level 8 card/ Give it an effect like "You cannot summon this card except by removing from play 2 or more monsters from your side of the field." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parion555 Posted February 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 Okay,i'll put the DEF effect and drawback,but should i keep the first effect or not? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Cursed Reaction Posted February 2, 2010 Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 I like the first effect. Keep it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parion555 Posted February 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 Ok thanks i'll change it right now.Is this better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Cursed Reaction Posted February 2, 2010 Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 Better, yep. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Griffin Posted February 2, 2010 Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 Concept is bad.Don't make degenerate cards.Never design a card which is designed to be used against a particular card/archtype/deck type/monster type/attribute. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 2, 2010 Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 this card is virtually useless without any Blackwings around Personally I find it UPed because of that 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parion555 Posted February 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 3, 2010 Yeah but look at it's attack,that makes it balanced enough even if there are no Blackwing monsters on the field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Griffin Posted February 3, 2010 Report Share Posted February 3, 2010 Concept is bad.Don't make degenerate cards.Never design a card which is designed to be used against a particular card/archtype/deck type/monster type/attribute. Again, this point means that the whole card idea is awful and this should be torn up and the concept binned. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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