Mister Volcano Posted February 2, 2010 Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 Hey all, new to the forums. Here's my first card:Lore: This card is also treated as a Warrior-Type monster. This card inflicts Piercing damage. Once per turn, you can remove from play 1 Monster Card in your Deck to increase this card's ATK by the removed Monster Card's Level x 100 until the End Phase. Then, you can discard 1 card with the same name as the removed card to have this card gain 1 additional attack this turn. This is the orignal draft, although I'm not 100% sure of balancing issues: should it be lvl 6, pay 500 LP in addition to the remove, halve or use original ATK for the extra attack, make the discard mandatory, put a limit on the bonus, etc. Thoughts? Don't go easy on me for being new :DSorry if pic is overused (can't remember where I found it). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leoluiz Posted February 2, 2010 Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 1st card????? I just can't belive. It's awesome. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazin Kay Posted February 2, 2010 Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 Neither can I. At all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted February 2, 2010 Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 Not sure about the OCG, know that may - canbut for first card this is actually great Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Shaymin:. Posted February 2, 2010 Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 For your first card its pretty good Sick pic 9.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted February 2, 2010 Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 Pick's awsome!OCG is near perfect.Effect is original and it's also ballanced.A 10/10, (Added Newbie bonus).Keep this up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Cursed Reaction Posted February 2, 2010 Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 OCG could improve but for a first card, really good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 3, 2010 Report Share Posted February 3, 2010 last sentence sounds a little weird for the OCG but regardless the OCG errors are very minor anyway for an early card, this is very balanced, so I'll give it 9.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mister Volcano Posted February 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 3, 2010 Thanks for the feedback, glad to hear its balanced. Caught what you meant about the last line so I've updated it and changed some other wording. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GoblinKing01 Posted February 3, 2010 Report Share Posted February 3, 2010 During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent. instead of the piercing part.Otherwise very good :)9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Duo~ Posted February 3, 2010 Report Share Posted February 3, 2010 Not bad for a first card. :) 9.5/10 Still, the wording needs to be changed a bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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