FROG'S RULE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[kuribo lord]

Please leave comments. I appreciate CONSTRUCTIVE criticism very much:

 

 

EFFECT: Pay 1000 life points to activate this card. The activation of this card cannot be negated. This card cannot be destroyed except by its' own effect. While this card remains on the field, you may control no monsters if you control one or more "frog" tokens. once per turn, you may pay 100 life points to summon one "frog" token (1 star, water attribute, reptile type, ATK 100 DEF 100) to your side of the field. If your opponent declares an attack against a "frog" token on your side of the field, decrease your opponents lifepoints by 100 points. If a "frog" token on your side of the field is destroyed, end your opponents battle step. if you summon 10 "frog" tokens with this card, destroy this card and add one "Animated Frog Factory" from your deck or graveyard to your hand.

 

[Chaos Flame]

The pics are the same. The first just has a strong stall effect that is probably broken. The OCG on the second card just doesn't work. 6/10

[kuribo lord]

Thanks for the comments. However I would rather your critique be more certain. How do you expect people to improve on their work with comments like "Probably broken" and "just doesn't work"?

[kuribo lord]

I know what that link leads to without following it, you incompetant fool. Your behavior is both grotesque and shocking.

 

PLEASE DO NOT FOLLOW THE LINK PEOPLE!

[Sp1at]

OCG fix:

Pay 1000 Life Points to activate this card. The activation of this card cannot be negated. This card cannot be destroyed except by its' own effect. While this card remains on the field, you may control no monsters if you control one or more "Frog" tokens. Once per turn, you may pay 100 Life Points to Summon one "Frog" token (Level 1, WATER, Reptile-Type, ATK 100 DEF 100) to your side of the field. If your opponent declares an attack against a "Frog" token on your side of the field, inflict 100 Life Points of damage to your opponent. If a "Frog" token on your side of the field is destroyed, end your opponents Battle Step. If you Summon 10 "Frog" tokens with this card, destroy this card and add one "Animated Frog Factory" from your deck or Graveyard to your Hand.

 

Alot of OCG errors heres a thread that will help you

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-167644.html

 

its ok

6/10

[ragnarok1945]

it won't load the first pic for me

 

the OCG has been corrected already for the 1st card

 

the OCG is really bad on the 2nd, along with the capitalization errors

 

1st card effect is broken too

 

5/10