The Grim Reaper

[Parion555]

I just made this card and i think that it would go perfectly in a zombie deck.But like always,comment.

 

 

Effect:

 

This card cannot be normal summoned or set.This card can only be special summoned from your hand by removing from play three zombie-type monsters you control.This card gains attack equal to your removed from play zombie-type monsters x500.Once per turn,you can remove one zombie-type monster from your hand to special summon one zombie-type monster from your graveyard.Each one of your standby phases pay 1000 LP.If you cannot,destroy this card.When this card is destroyed by your opponent's card effect,special summon one zombie-type monster from your graveyard.

[Chaos Flame]

Eh, not really.

Focusses too much on removal to be good for zombies. The OCG is poor and the effect I'd say has too many downsides.

[Parion555]

Well yeah,i don't want to make it too overpowered so instead of sending cards to the graveyard i made it remove them from play,we already have zombie master for sending them to the grave so i wanted to make something different.

[Chaos Flame]

The thing is, the last place zombies want their stuff is removed. PZ and Mezuki are ok (actually they are awesome) since they remove only one card to SS something. This also cannot be SS from the Grave like most zombies like to be. To sum up, I would never use this.

[.:Shaymin:.]

OCG Errors

 

good pic

 

8.1/10

[Metal Skull]

OVERUSED PIC!!

OCG IS BAD AND THE EFFECT IS KINDA OK.

7/10

[-Griffin]

This card cannot be normal summoned or set.This card can only be special summoned from your hand by removing from play three zombie-type monsters you control. This card gains attack equal to your removed from play zombie-type monsters x500.Once per turn' date='you can remove one zombie-type monster from your hand to special summon one zombie-type monster from your graveyard.Each one of your standby phases pay 1000 LP.If you cannot,destroy this card.When this card is destroyed by your opponent's card effect,special summon one zombie-type monster from your graveyard.

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And by this point, it has become too inconsistent for a Zombie any Deck to use. Zombies are fast and competitive, they won't want to run something slow like this.

[Guest Dark-Azkrin666]

by the way the effect is worded this monster would have over kill Atk, and with zombie's alot can have at least 2000 Atk easy, so thats what 2000x500 and thats just for 1 right there, way over kill, but has those other effects so barly balences it over used pic, in total a 5/10

[ragnarok1945]

a lot of capitalization errors, though that's not too bad for OCG

 

it has way too many drawbacks on this card, remove some

 

5/10

[Parion555]

Thanks for the comments but i said already i wanted to do something different i know this card can't go in a competative zombie-deck but i made this card to try out something i thought about doing a second zombie card that will summon those removed from play monsters,i know it has a lot of drawbacks but that's the point,i didn't want to make it overpowered.

[-Griffin]

Thanks for the comments but i said already i wanted to do something different i know this card can't go in a competative zombie-deck but i made this card to try out something i thought about doing a second zombie card that will summon those removed from play monsters' date='i know it has a lot of drawbacks but that's the point,i didn't want to make it overpowered.

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The entire fact it requires you to have a 3 card field makes it inconsistent and pretty much unplayable. The fact it RFGs is just another nail in a coffin already 6 feet under.

[Parion555]

I understand what you're saying but with zombie's it's very easy to summon three monsters on the field,that's why they are one of the top decks.

[swimmer117]

This card idea and image is stolen. I came up with a similar card.

0/10

Here is MY Grim Reaper! Its called Death Incarnated

Lore: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned if more than three Monsters were destroyed during the last turn. This card gains 200 ATK and DEF for every Monster in your Graveyard. This card cannot be equipped with any Spell or Trap Cards. If this card is destroyed by battle or by a Monster Card's effect, remove it from play. Destroy all cards on the field and both players remove their hands from play and draw equal amount of cards from their respective decks.

[Parion555]

The picture is the same but the effect is completely different your one is much more powerful than the one i made.

[六兆年と一夜物語]

Feel the Rhythm, Feel the Rhyme,

Come on guys, it's OCG TIME!

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set.This card can only be Special Summoned from your hand by removing from play three 3 Zombie-Type monsters Monster Cards you control.This card gains attack This card's ATK is equal to your removed from play zombie-type monsters x500. Be more specific, is it the respective monster's Level x500? Once per turn, you can remove one Zombie-Type monster Monster Card from your hand to Special Summon one 1 Zombie-Type monster Monster Card from your Graveyard. Each one of your standby phases pay 1000 LP During your Standby Phase, pay 1000 Life Points. If you cannot can't, destroy this card. When this card is destroyed by your opponent's card effect, Special Summon one 1 Zombie-Type monster Monster Card from your Graveyard.

 

Serious work needed to be done:

 

Capitalization

Numbers must be numerical, not written (i.e. not "one", use "1")

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My opinion:

 

Why would you get rid of 3 good Zombies when you find out that you end up getting a leech? UP.

 

3/10.