Vampire Bund Posted February 4, 2010 Report Share Posted February 4, 2010 Cool card is though i tried as hard as i could on the effectand on this one to Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aero~ Posted February 4, 2010 Report Share Posted February 4, 2010 If they're level one or level 2, you have to make their star level that. Before I edit OCG, try to fix some thing that don't look right to you. (Compared to a real card.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vampire Bund Posted February 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 4, 2010 But other than that its still good right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ayasato-chan Posted February 4, 2010 Report Share Posted February 4, 2010 Level monsters are equal to their star level, so really the names should be "Devil Teri-Gram Magician Lv. 6" and "Devil Teri-Gram Magician Lv. 7". As for the OCG: "When this card is destroyed by battle your opponent must end their Battle Phase. Any battle damage recieved in a battle between this monster and a monster your opponent controls is reduced to 0." "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 1 face-up "Devil Teri-Gram Magician Lv. 6" on your field. When this card is Special Summoned, destroy all face-up Effect Monsters on your opponent's field." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yugioh507 Posted February 4, 2010 Report Share Posted February 4, 2010 Nice cards. I'd give the 1st one a 7/10 and the 2nd one a 9/10. 5 stars altogether though.You should make a LV3 and a LV4And maybe LV5 and LV6 because it could get really good to LV6 and I'd like to see what you'd come up with. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vampire Bund Posted February 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 4, 2010 well thank u dude Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dante Dimercurio Posted February 4, 2010 Report Share Posted February 4, 2010 If they're level one or level 2' date=' you have to make their star level that. Before I edit OCG, try to fix some thing that don't look right to you. (Compared to a real card.)[/quote'] That's all to it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vampire Bund Posted February 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 4, 2010 yep u all are right as always Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 4, 2010 Report Share Posted February 4, 2010 the 2nd card if you're going to say lv2 in the card name, then it actually has to be lv2 in reality, not lv7 the OCG errors have been pointed out already, and the 1st card you need to give it another effect. WAY too boring right now 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.