Ninjutsu Art of Assasination

[TOMY_25]

Trying for the first Trap Card...

Support for Ninja archetype....

Image credit to doshiroute from Deviantart.

 

 

Enjoy,Correct,and Rate.

[ragnarok1945]

the OCG looks fine to me

 

picture looks good, not great though

 

You should put a slight drawback on this card though

 

8/10

[TOMY_25]

Thanks for the rate. to be honest, I can't think of any drawbacks to be added.

[Kurinaga]

If you can't think of a drawback to it then just remove one of the three effects. Take out the shuriken or life points and it'll be fine IMO.

 

The only OCG I can see is "Inflict damage by half the attack points of the attacking monster."

I'd say "Decrease your opponents life points by half the attack of the destroyed monster" or "Inflict damage equal to half the attack points of the destroyed monster

 

I've seen both used but you used the two together and it just doesn't sound right. Of course you have the right to completely disregard everything I say if you want. the destroyed part is because your destroying it and it won't be attacking after you destroy it. You use attacking if it survives and destroyed if it dies, at least that's how I've always seen them in the TCG.

 

7/10 Fix the OCG and it's 8/10

[Lalapop]

Take away the life point damage and it's perfect

 

OCG fix:

 

Instead of "After activation" simply say "Then"

 

Good card ...Sakuretsu Armor with a specific +1 hand addition. 8.5/10