karimryu Posted February 4, 2010 Report Share Posted February 4, 2010 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted February 4, 2010 Report Share Posted February 4, 2010 1st is very well ballenced, has a medium pic, and OCG (is=are, and set=Set).A 8.3/102nd, has a bad pic, is ballenced enough, OCG (there=their, Face-Up=face-up, last sentence = "..All Monster Cards that would be sent to the Graveyard are sent to their owners Decks instead."A 7/103rd, Nice pic, Effect is confusing I don't really know what you mean with it.?/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 4, 2010 Report Share Posted February 4, 2010 there's only minor OCG and grammar mistakes, so it's nothing too big before the 1st sentence of the first card you need to say "As long as this card remains face up on the field" for the 3rd card I'm unsure how practical that effect will become....... 7.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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