GOLDBOMB Posted February 4, 2010 Report Share Posted February 4, 2010 MY FIRST TRAP CARD.ENJOY.PLEASE RATE AND COMMENT. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starly_64 Posted February 4, 2010 Report Share Posted February 4, 2010 It needs some improvements:-Do not fully capitalize the name; "Imond Attack for Marins"-I don't see how the image relates much to the effect (or maybe i'm just unfamiliar with the characters in the images).-OCG errors:"Destroy all face-up Dragon-Type monsters on the field."-The effect could be a bit more imaginative. I know this is an example, but something like:"Destroy face-up Dragon-Type monsters on the field for every Warrior-Type monster you control."-Why is it an Equip Card if the effect is best suited for a Normal Trap? Also, there are no Equip Trap Cards unless the effect involves it equipping to a Monster. Considering it being your first Trap Card, 4/10. It's not a great or original Trap, but it's far from being the worst. If you need more help, you can PM me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Shaymin:. Posted February 4, 2010 Report Share Posted February 4, 2010 OCG Errors The pic is not Hi-Res When this Card in on the Field, all BEAST-TYPE cards will be destroyed. 5/10 Some Effort was put in Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bran2939 Posted February 4, 2010 Report Share Posted February 4, 2010 why warhammer 40k pics of chaos? should be sumin like a knight or a dead dragon...6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
B3lly N3rd Posted February 4, 2010 Report Share Posted February 4, 2010 It needs some improvements:-Do not fully capitalize the name; "Imond Attack for Marins"-I don't see how the image relates much to the effect (or maybe i'm just unfamiliar with the characters in the images).-OCG errors:"Destroy all face-up Dragon-Type monsters on the field."-The effect could be a bit more imaginative. I know this is an example' date=' but something like:"Destroy face-up Dragon-Type monsters on the field for every Warrior-Type monster you control."-Why is it an Equip Card if the effect is best suited for a Normal Trap? Also, there are no Equip Trap Cards unless the effect involves it equipping to a Monster. Considering it being your first Trap Card, 4/10. It's not a great or original Trap, but it's far from being the worst. If you need more help, you can PM me.[/quote'] yeah what starly said..i not so good with correcting cards oh and always cap the first letter in a sentence...sup starly long time no see im prolly not remembered Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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