Dark Masked Golem, Critic pls.

[SuperNarb]

Yuh, I need some critic, constructive only pls.

 

 

Lore:

 

This card can not be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 1 DARK and 1 EARTH monster in your Graveyard or by its own effect. When this card is destroyed by battle place a Masked Counter on 1 DARK or 1 EARTH monster on your side of the field. When a monster with a Masked Counter is destroyed Special Summon this card from the Graveyard. Increase this cards ATK by 300 for each time this card has been Special Summoned.

[Brimtosis]

I can hardly read the effect, but it sounds good. A bit hard to get on the feild for a Lv4, but it could come in handy after a while.

 

solid 7/10

[Cloister]

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can onöy be Special Summoned by its own effect. You can Special Summon this card by removing from play 1 DARK and 1 EARTH monster in your Graveyard. When this card is destroyed by battle, place 1 Masked Counter on 1 DARK or 1 EARTH monster you control. When a monster with a Masked Counter is destroyed, Special Summon this card from the Graveyard. This card gains 300 ATK for each time this card has been Special Summoned.

 

The last effect is really strange, but original since it gets back to the field with the "new" ATK like it, but it wouldn't be that very useful

8/10 (good for new member) :]

[SuperNarb]

Thanks yall <3.

[Cloister]

The last effect is cool, but since it relys on removing cards from play, it will soon be unable to summon

And second Summon effect is not that useful, you can make it to add a removed from play DARK or EARTH monster to the Graveyard instead when a mosnter is destroyed, so you can Summon this card back by removing them from play

[SuperNarb]

The last effect is cool' date=' but since it relys on removing cards from play, it will soon be unable to summon

And second Summon effect is not that useful, you can make it to add a removed from play DARK or EARTH monster to the Graveyard instead when a mosnter is destroyed, so you can Summon this card back by removing them from play

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Because when it's special summoned it gains 300 ATK it automatically has 1800 ATK, but I'm going to raise his stars to 6 and make his ATK 2300 to start off, better? Also because when a monster with a counter is destroyed you get to re summon him that's a special summon so he gains 300 ATK.

[Cloister]

yes, but if he is destroyed by an effect, he cannot be Summoned except by removing cards from your Graveyard, that's the point, but If you make him Level 6, make the ATK start at 1900 then or 2000, most 2100

[SuperNarb]

No dude, Its removing 1 DARK and 1 EARTH monster from play AND by its own effect.

 

Edit: Oh I'm sorry Didn't read your post very well, Should I just say when hes destroyed, not destroyed by battle?

[Cloister]

No, make it by battle only, but you can add some kind of adding back to the Graveyard effect, like "Once per turn, you can add 1 removed from play DARK or EARTH monster to your Graveyard." or something like that

 

He has TWO Summoning effects, so by its own effect shall be before everything else

[ragnarok1945]

the last effect is quite good for the 300 extra atk

 

and this one you don't need a limit since it'll take a while before it gets REALLY powerful, so if it was used against you, you'd have more than enough time to counter it anyway

 

8.9/10