My First Card

[asdasdel]

This is my first card design. Hope you like it.

 

When this card summoned (except Special summon) you can tribute a Light card from your field or hand to remove a Dark card from your opponent's field.

[.:Shaymin:.]

Good Pic

 

Minor OCG Errors

 

7.9/10

[Starly_64]

"When this card is Normal Summoned successfully, you can discard 1 LIGHT monster to remove from play 1 DARK monster your opponent controls."

 

+ Everything Shaymin said.

[asdasdel]

Good Pic

 

Minor OCG Errors

 

7.9/10

Thanks for comment(:

 

 

"When this card is Normal Summoned successfully' date=' you can discard 1 LIGHT monster to remove from play 1 DARK monster your opponent controls."

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Thanks very much but can i say;

"When this card is Normal Summoned successfully, you can discard 1 LIGHT monster or tribute one from your field to remove from play 1 DARK monster your opponent controls."

[Guest Cursed Reaction]

Everything the rest said but I would change the OCG.

"When this card is Normal Summoned or Flip Summoned successfully, you can tribute a LIGHT monster you control to remove from play a DARK monster your opponent controls."

 

I like the idea though. 7.8/10

[asdasdel]

thanks

[WTF]

good job

 

minor OCG errors

 

pic is okay

 

8/10

[ragnarok1945]

way too dull of an effect

 

and the OCG errors have been pointed out already, so just give it another effect and you're good

 

7.8/10

[wasim4teen]

My First Cradis Seto Kaiba.

[The Dark Megacyber]

My First Cradis Seto Kaiba.

 

Noob, noob, noob.

 

Learn to make your own threads

 

@Okan Birbinay:

 

You have a bad OCG, so, there's the fix:

 

"When this card is Normal or Flip Summoned, you can send 1 LIGHT Monster from your hand or that you control to the Graveyard to remove from play 1 face-up DARK Monster your opponent controls."

 

7.5/10

[asdasdel]

My First Cradis Seto Kaiba.

you can create your own topic (: