Second Opinion: Decker the Hypergrinder, Warrior of the Desert, and Jackal Fighter

[Kingdom Xathers]

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[Max Darkness]

Decker

 

When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent, add the top card of your Graveyard to the bottom of your Deck.

 

 

Warrior of the Desert

 

When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent, add the bottom card of your Graveyard to the bottom of your Deck.

 

 

Jackel

 

When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent, remove from play the top card of your opponent's Deck.

 

 

Nice idea, poor execution. Would be better as a high-level multiple tribute monster with a selection of Deck and Graveyard-manipulating effects, not low-level monsters. Also, the Jackel doesn't seem to be related to the other two.

 

6/10

[ragnarok1945]

all the effects are just fine given their low levels

 

and Max Darkness already pointed out the OCG errors

 

the only major flaw is that the 3 effects are WAY too similar to one another, deviate them more

 

8/10

[Kingdom Xathers]

So, 7/10 overall.

 

Thanks guys. I'll be sure to remember that.

 

Any other comments?

 

EDIT: Card's edited.