Possible New Archetype

[Lightning Bagon]

IMG Credit: Jazin Kay, HP Doom, Night Walker, Wanderley

 

Twilight monsters are monsters with 0 ATK and DEF, with effects that can power them up or make a gateway to a OTK

 

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set, this card can only be Special Summoned by discarding 1 Zombie- Type monster and Tributing 2 Fiend- Type monster. For every Fiend and Zombie- Type monster in your Graveyard, this card gains 500 ATK and DEFOnce per turn if this is the only card on your field select 1 Fiend- Type monster on your Graveyard and activate that cards effect.

 

 

This card is also treated as a Zombie- Type monster as long as it is in your hand. If there is another face- up Fiend- Type monster you can Special Summon this card from your hand.

 

 

"Twilight Branch" + "Twilight Branch" + "Twilight Branch"

This card can only be Fusion Summoned by fusing the above Fusion Mmaterial monsters. For every DARK monster in your Graveyard this card gains 300 ATK. When this card is summoned destroy all non-Fiend- Type monsters with 1000 ATK or more. Once per turn you can pay 1000 Life Points to destroy 1 Synchro monster on the field.

 

 

This card is also treated as a Rock- Type monster. If this is the only card on your side of the field, this card gains 2100 ATK. If there is no Spell or Trap Cards on your field, this card gains 2000 DEF. If this card attacks a LIGHT monster this card loses 300 ATK.

 

 

This card is also treated as a LIGHT monster. If this card would be destriyed you can destroy a "Twilight Branch" instead.

[ragnarok1945]

for the first card lv12 is too high for this since it only gains 300 atk per zombie and fiend, so it'll need at least 15 of them to make its atk reasonable

 

I'd make it lv9, then boost it to 500 atk

 

also for its last effect you should only be allowed to do that once per turn

 

7/10

[Lightning Bagon]

Okay, thanks fix'd

[六兆年と一夜物語]

Feel the rhythm, feel the rhyme,

C'mon guys it's OCG TIME!

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set, . This card can only be Special Summoned by discarding 1 Zombie- Type monster and Tributing 2 Fiend- Type monsters. For every Fiend and Zombie- Type monster in your Graveyard, this card gains 500 ATK and DEF. Once per turn, if this is the only card on your field, select 1 Fiend- Type monster on in your Graveyard and activate that cards effect.

 

Only a few punctuation mistakes and some unsure ones. 8/10.

 

This card is also treated as a Zombie- Type monster as long as it is in your hand. If there is another face- up Fiend- Type monster Where? Be more specific. ,you can Special Summon this card from your hand

 

Like the other card, however there is an undefined place in your effect. 7/10.

[ragnarok1945]

Okay' date=' thanks fix'd

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ok, then I'll raise my rate to 8/10

[Lightning Bagon]

Feel the rhythm' date=' feel the rhyme,

C'mon guys it's OCG TIME!

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set[s'],[/s] . This card can only be Special Summoned by discarding 1 Zombie- Type monster and Tributing 2 Fiend- Type monsters. For every Fiend and Zombie- Type monster in your Graveyard, this card gains 500 ATK and DEF. Once per turn, if this is the only card on your field, select 1 Fiend- Type monster on in your Graveyard and activate that cards effect.

 

Only a few punctuation mistakes and some unsure ones. 8/10.

 

This card is also treated as a Zombie- Type monster as long as it is in your hand. If there is another face- up Fiend- Type monster Where? Be more specific. ,you can Special Summon this card from your hand

 

Like the other card, however there is an undefined place in your effect. 7/10.

 

1st part incorrect

2nd part see above

[Lightning Bagon]

New fusion added

[ragnarok1945]

"For every DARK monster in your Graveyard this card gains 300 ATK." should be "This card gains 300 ATK for every DARK monster in your Graveyard."

 

summoned should be Summoned, but thanks to its synchro killing effect, I'll give this 8/10

[Lightning Bagon]

Thanks

[Lightning Bagon]

Bump