Realm of The Unkown!

[randrian]

8) Sup hats? I'm a new member here at YCM. Not really new, I've had this account for like two months, and I have been working on this set for like ever. Totally nowhere near done, I just want some suggestions.

 

Like how to post a set. How do you make those little thingys that say "Click to show" and then when you click they blow up? And then click again and it hides? That would save some space.

 

So I started out knowing I wanted to make a type, but I didn't know what to call it, so I just wrote in "Unknown."

 

And then it hit me: Wow. Unknown, like an alternate black/white dimension that few of us actually even know about. It is constantly changing from black to white to gray in and around this universe. Pretty crazy. Anyways, they have sort of this army type thing with commanders and soldiers (which I haven't gotten around to making quite yet). Their whole life is based on The Order Unknown, which is a bible like book. They pray to some weird black-hole like god. And their greatest fear is Eternal Suffering, a vicious ghost which feeds on negative emotions and drains happiness and pleasure from its victims.

Alot of the weaker monsters will be vanillas, to help tell the story.

 

I'm not sure so I'm just gonna go ahead and post the images, with the card effects underneath. Tell me and OCG errors and if the cards are OP which I'm sure some are. I know I need some weaker monsters.

 

This card cannot be special summoned. Increase the ATK of this monster by 100 for every face up Unknown-type monster on the field. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, your opponent cannot declare another Unknown-type monster as the target for an attack.

 

When an Unknown type monster is sent from the field to the grave yard as a result of battle, destroy its attacking monster.

 

This card is used to Ritual Summon "Kublai, The Bestial General". You must also tribute monsters from the field or your hand whose totals levels are 7 or more.

 

This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card "Dance of Blades". This card can attack twice per turn. This card can only attack an opponent's life points directly once per turn, and if successful, cannot attack at all during your next turn.

 

This card is used to Ritual Summon "Sakit, The Reality of Eternal Suffering". You must also Tribute monsters from the field or your hand whose total Levels equal 8 or more.

 

This card can only be ritual summoned by the effect of "Nais, The Cause of Suffering". Increase the ATK of this card by 100 for every Unknown-type monster in your graveyard (Max. 2). When this card is destroyed as a result of battle, it goes to your hand instead of the graveyard.

 

When this card is destroyed as a result of battle, send one card of your choice from the field to the graveyard.

 

 

This card cannot be destroyed by the effect of a spell card. As long this card remains face up, increase the DEF of all Unknown-type monsters by 200 (Excluding this card).

 

As long as this card remains face up on the field, Unknown-type monsters are not affected by spell or trap cards (except for this card). When an Unknown type monster attacks a monster with a higher ATK or DEF, pay 500 Life Points to destroy the monster without damage calculation.

 

Send a monster from your side of the field to the graveyard to activate this card. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, increase the ATK and DEF of all Unknown type monsters by 300.

 

A fallen angel from the Unknown Realm. It is surrounded by a a white flame that is said to be able to burn anything. It is trapped in a black hole.

 

A being that has died multiple painful deaths. No one is quite sure as to what it is, or was. It wanders around the Unknown Realm aimlessly.

 

 

 

SUGGESTIONS ON THE FIRST LIKE THIRD OF MY SET?!?!?!??! Please point out all OCG errors, because I know there are plenty! Any cards OP? Tell me which one(s) and why, and suggestions on how to water them down.

 

Any common images? New Card ideas? I need some vanillas and weaker monsters, obviously.

[Guest Cursed Reaction]

This is how you do spoilers:

 

open square bracket, type in "spoiler" after the square bracket, = sign, what the spoiler is called (for example: Yu-Gi-Oh!), close square bracket, put your card or whatever in the middle, open square bracket, forward slash, type in "spoiler", close square bracket.

 

Here is an example:

 

[spoiler=Yu-Gi-Oh!]My example of a spoiler

 

 

Anyway, I like the idea and any more cards coming?

[.:Shaymin:.]

Pics need background

 

8/10

[shadowka]

These are great. I love the idea, but there are a little too many vanillas. 8/10

[asdasdel]

These are great. I love the idea' date=' but there are a little too many vanillas. 8/10

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yes ^^ exactly

[Imperial tech]

Well I'm not sure if this should be in the Realistic cards section.

By the way, if you want a spoiler, type in this code:

[spoiler=Name of Spoiler]Content of Spoiler[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Name of Spoiler]Content of Spoiler

 

Cool idea for the cards. I like the "Unknown" type idea.

8/10

[ragnarok1945]

you posted this thread elsewhere already...........

[randrian]

you posted this thread elsewhere already...........

My brother deleted it when I wasn't paying attention and left the edit window open. Jerk. At least he wasn't super jerk and copied the whole thing to the clipboard...

 

[spoiler=chicken....]thanks to all who taught me to make a spoiler! lol

 

 

Thanks to all for the ratings! I was expecting stuff in the range of like 2-3/10 hahahaha. I'm a pessimist. More are coming after I do "research" for this term paper. I'll release more like in a few days? Sure let's call it that.

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http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-185964-post-3752868.html#pid3752868

 

 

New thread...sorry.

[randrian]

How do I delete this? I;m trying to but it wont let me....