Zeaux Posted February 5, 2010 Report Share Posted February 5, 2010 [align=center]... So, here is my first. Mago, Lightsworn Specialist(Image credit - Jazin Kay) Warrior/Effect/LIGHT/ATK 1700/DEF 500**** -Card Effect- If this card destroys a monster by battle, you can Special Summon 1 Level 3 or lower monster from your hand. Once per turn, during you Main Phase, select 1 monster on the field. The selected monster is unaffected by the effect of Spell or Trap Cards until the End Phase of this turn. During each of your End Phases, send 2 cards from the top of your Deck to the Graveyard.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted February 5, 2010 Report Share Posted February 5, 2010 Level? xD you always forget that! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted February 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 5, 2010 Aaaaaaaaaaaarhg, I hate myself. ;@ But he is a Level 4. =] EDIT: Edited the card already. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted February 5, 2010 Report Share Posted February 5, 2010 found 1 tiny error: effect = effectsgood way to get cards to the Graveyard for JDlike it : D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted February 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 5, 2010 Thanks you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scatty Posted February 5, 2010 Report Share Posted February 5, 2010 Kinda strong...but I'll live with it. Know why I call it strong? Look: -put 3 in a deck that does not contain any Lightsworn. It's effect becomes: "This card is not affected by Spells and Trap cards. During each of your End Phases, send 2 cards from the top of your Deck to the Graveyard." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted February 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 5, 2010 It only works during you turn. Yeah, maybe little strong, but an okay Level 4 monster to me. Maybe a edit would make it better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Killey Posted February 5, 2010 Report Share Posted February 5, 2010 It's overpowered because it can grant immunity status to any monster you control on top of having a special summoning effect that is generic to any Level 3 monster you use. It seems like a one-off card rather than a lightsworn card because it's effect doesn't exactly support Lightsworns out right. Even then because of the nature of LS decks this card is too powerful for them since it makes a card immune to S/T's for a turn, including itself, making it easier to trigger the SS effect. With this type of effect I would make it mil 1 card from the deck rather than 2 to have it be less useful of a miller in comparison to other LS. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted February 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 5, 2010 Maybe you are right. I'll remove the lightsworn from its name and make it a normal Effect Monster. Just made it Lightsworn because the picture. And also add a drawback. Thanks Killey. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted February 5, 2010 Report Share Posted February 5, 2010 I think it is a good support for LS and not OPed at all, especially if run in a normal Deck without LS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 5, 2010 Report Share Posted February 5, 2010 I'm unsure if in the last effect you should have an alternative basically just add in if you don't discard the 2 cards, this card gets destroyed 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Killey Posted February 5, 2010 Report Share Posted February 5, 2010 I think it is a good support for LS and not OPed at all' date=' especially if run in a normal Deck without LS[/quote'] It's good support for any Deck not just LS and that's kind of the issue here. Also, how can you not think this card is overpowered when it can grant 1 card including itself immunity from S/T's then deal damage and SS a tuner for a quick Synchro Summon or SS another monster to gain field advantage. The SS ability doesn't really bother me that much it's the S/T immunity in conjunction with the SS ability that bothers me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted February 5, 2010 Report Share Posted February 5, 2010 that part is not OPed, but it could be for a cost, it CANNOT grant itself immunity Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scatty Posted February 5, 2010 Report Share Posted February 5, 2010 It only works during you turn. Yeah' date=' maybe little strong, but an okay Level 4 monster to me. Maybe a edit would make it better.[/quote'] Just put "excepting itself" to the spell/trap ignore and it will be ok. Actually, if you do that you could then increase it's ATK by 100. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted February 5, 2010 Report Share Posted February 5, 2010 If you make it "except this card" it would not change that much because it is not that strong and I would personally much rather give the effect to lets say a Blue-Eyes and attack with that instead of this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted February 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 5, 2010 Thanks for the comments peoples. Edits will be made later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bull3tM0nk3y Posted February 5, 2010 Report Share Posted February 5, 2010 What wrong with your card? The effect text is bullry the card is bigger, slightly darker/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted February 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 5, 2010 I just used MSE (Magic Set Editor). Card maker at my PC is with problems. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Killey Posted February 5, 2010 Report Share Posted February 5, 2010 that part is not OPed' date=' but it could be for a cost, it CANNOT grant itself immunity[/quote'] It says select 1 monster on the field meaning it can select itself...How did you miss that point altogether. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted February 5, 2010 Report Share Posted February 5, 2010 that part is not OPed' date=' but it could be for a cost, it CANNOT grant itself immunity[/quote'] It says select 1 monster on the field meaning it can select itself...How did you miss that point altogether. well, yeah, but I would not protect this, actually, but it could be good to protect it, but nothing I would prefer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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