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[asdasdel]

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[asdasdel]

i am waiting for comments and ratings :s

[The-Wick!]

i think they do are useful, but you misspeled some OCG gramar, ill put here the ones i know how to correct:

"places" should be Special Summon, you don't have to say in his/her control because is alredy is HIS-HER SIDE OF THE FIELD, DARH!!! an you should retire "(face-up)" you can rearenge this sentence: "...and Special Summon in his/her side of the field in face-up Defense position." . same to the other one. the first card is really oped, you should put at least a limit for how much the monster can gain. i think you can work harder.

 

6.9/10

[asdasdel]

i think they do are useful' date=' but you misspeled some OCG gramar, ill put here the ones i know how to correct:

"places" should be Special Summon, you don't have to say in his/her control because is alredy is HIS-HER SIDE OF THE FIELD, DARH!!! an you should retire "(face-up)" you can rearenge this sentence: "...and Special Summon in his/her side of the field in face-up Defense position." . same to the other one. the first card is really oped, you should put at least a limit for how much the monster can gain. i think you can work harder.

 

6.9/10

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thanks for comment. i fixed the ocg errors that you noticed (:

[Sp1at]

negate the destruction? you mean negate the attack

then "When a monster on the field is destroyed" should be "When a face-up monster on your side of the field is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard by Battle."

life points=Life Points

and lastly where you said "your opponent selects 1 six or less level monster" it should be " your opponent selects 1 Level 6 or less monster from his/her deck"

 

thats it. There very nice cards but you should add more supports for your Normal Monster.

 

for now my rate is 7.5/10

[ragnarok1945]

for a new member, the OCG errors are mostly limited to just some capitalization problems, so that's very good

 

A shame the only monster you have is a vanilla though, I wish you put an effect monster here

 

8/10

[asdasdel]

negate the destruction? you mean negate the attack

then "When a monster on the field is destroyed" should be "When a face-up monster on your side of the field is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard by Battle."

life points=Life Points

and lastly where you said "your opponent selects 1 six or less level monster" it should be " your opponent selects 1 Level 6 or less monster from his/her deck"

thats it. There very nice cards but you should add more supports for your Normal Monster.

 

for now my rate is 7.5/10

i fixed the ocg errors. thanks for notice them (: and thanks for rating

life points > Life Points

destroyed' date='destruction > attacked,attack

1 monster that is level six or more > 1 Level 6 or more monster

1 monster that is level six or less > 1 Level 6 or less monster

 

 

for a new member, the OCG errors are mostly limited to just some capitalization problems, so that's very good

 

A shame the only monster you have is a vanilla though, I wish you put an effect monster here

 

8/10

thanks for suggestion and rating (: i will consider your suggestion and try to add new cards. (:

[asdasdel]

i have added another card. please comment

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eww a vanilla with no effects.

[asdasdel]

i made these cards randomly. every monster must have a effect?

[-Griffin]

Monsters don't need effects. They just need a point.

 

The Normal Monster here has no point.

[asdasdel]

ok then (: rate the others?

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There should be effect monsters. A Vanilla on its own shows Lazyness.