a defenseful monster and attempt at dragon support

[DeathSDelano]

img credit to ~hibikio from deviantart

 

i was just trying to make a Dragon version of Double Summon but add a protection effect to the dragons summoned during the turn this card was activated

 

OCG corrections would help if i did something wrong

 

 

basically a monster than can protect your monsters and help tuners and key low level cards live longer at the price of discarding cards(though Dark World may benefit from it's cost XD)

If one of your opponent's monsters attacks a monster on your side of the field you can discard one card from your hand to the negate the attack. Once per turn, you can discard 2 cards from your hand to make 1 Level 4 or lower monster unable to be destoryed as a result of battle until your next Standby Phase.

[ragnarok1945]

for Dragon's Connection, change active to activate (1st sentence)

 

non Dragon-Type should be non-Dragon-Type

 

for Hamikari, the sentence of "Once per turn, you can discard 2 cards from your hand to make 1 Level 4 or lower monster unable to be destoryed as a result of battle until your next Standby Phase." sounds REALLY weird, not sure what the proper OCG is though

 

9/10

[DeathSDelano]

ok fix'd the 1st one

 

and on hamikari i was not sure on it either so i just put it how it is

[-Deadpool-]

Hamikari

If one of your opponent's monsters attacks a monster on your side of the field you can discard one card from your hand to the negate the attack. Once per turn, you can discard two cards from your hand to make one Level 4 or lower monster unable to be destroyed by battle this turn

 

Im not sure but i believe this is all of the errors and nice cards

9.5/10

[DeathSDelano]

the can't be destory by battle duration is Suppose to be pretty much until after your Opponent's turn so i put Standby Phase