a card i made

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i made this card please tell me what you think! EDIT: Updated!

[SPAMMINGTROOPER]

Err...Overpowered But 8/10

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thank you but the reason why its overpowered is look closely at it it is limited edition :P and the reason why it has an ability like that is because, at least for me, magician cards are kinda hard to find...

[Starly_64]

+Nice image

+The effect is balanced.

-If a monster has an Effect, it should be an Effect Monster.

-Couldn't Magician be replaced with Spellcaster-Type?

-A couple OCG errors, but not too off:

"While you control this face-up monster, your opponent cannot activate Spell Cards and Summon any Spellcaster-Type monsters. This card gains 200 ATK and 100 DEF for every Spellcaster-Type monster in your Graveyard."

 

Best card you've made so far. 7.5/10.

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well i am going by classic yu-gi-oh i really really dislike the new ones... and usually in classic it is called Magician class as least from what i remember... but the rest of that is a good call thank you also i am new to these forums what is ocg?

[bran2939]

no in old still called spellcaster!

i got dark magician, dark magician of black chaos, and lots other great old yugioh magician cards, they are spellcaster type!!

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well i also have magician of black chaos and sorcerer of dark magic and on mine they say magician O.o

[Xenogears]

Perhaps you have some fake cards?

Well it's balanced enough for me the effect is also good.

8/10

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no there not fake cards well the sorcerer of dark magic i know for sure is not because i got that in a booster pack... and thank you for your rating!

[Teh ZWOOTS]

1. Should be an effect monster

2. Some OCG mistakes

3. You would have to show your opponent your hand....

 

5/10 because I HATE normal monsters with effects.

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here is the updated version

EDIT: fixed it! the... problem with the card not being there i mean...

[Teh ZWOOTS]

here is the updated version

 

Try:

 

"As long as this card remains face-up on your side of the field, your opponent cannot activate spell cards, trap cards or play Spellcaster-Type monsters. This card's ATK and DEF is equal to the number of Spellcaster-Type monster in your Graveyard and field x200."

[Starly_64]

There are still OCG errors:

Do not use "With this Spellcaster on the field" or "he". Instead, put "This card" or "it".

 

But it looks better.

[Verebazs2]

well i am going by classic yu-gi-oh i really really dislike the new ones... and usually in classic it is called Magician class as least from what i remember... but the rest of that is a good call thank you also i am new to these forums what is ocg?

 

Magicians is an archetype of Spellcasters.

OCG fix:

While this monster remains on your side of the field, your Opponent cannot activate Spell cards, or Summon Spellcaster-type monsters. This card gains 200 ATK and 100 DEF for each Spellcaster-type monster in your Graveyard, and on your side of the field.

Good work. 8/10

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oh wow you actually see the cards? all i see is "make your own yu-gi-oh cards @ yugiohcardmaker.com"

[Teh ZWOOTS]

oh wow you actually see the cards? all i see is "make your own yu-gi-oh cards @ yugiohcardmaker.com"

 

I clicked on "reply" and copied the code inside of "[/img]".

 

Too fix this, do NOT just copy your card's image location. Click on the card and copy the code that appears below.

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ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh thats much easier then what i was doing before... haha

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Alright this should be the final outcome with virtually all the problems fixed.

 

[Teh ZWOOTS]

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh thats much easier then what i was doing before... haha

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Alright this should be the final outcome with virtually all the problems fixed.

 

 

1. Try "as long as" instead of "while".

2. You can't have your card gain ATK or DEF if your card's ATK or DEF is "?". That's like

12 + x = ?

[Aero~]

As long as this card remains face- up on the Field, your opponent cannot activate Spell Cards ot Summon Spellcaster- Type Monsters. This card's ATK and DEF is equal to the number of Spellcaster- Type Monsters in the Fiend or Graveyard x300.

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alright here is the next version!

also i raised it by one level and turned it into secret rare.

 

[Starly_64]

As long as this Spellcaster= As long as this card

use= activate

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ALRIGHT! there