Teh ZWOOTS Posted February 6, 2010 Report Share Posted February 6, 2010 Pay 1000 life points to special summon 1 normal, light, Dragon-Type monster from you Graveyard to your side of the field. As long as this card remains face up on the field, the monster that was special summoned by this card's effect has 3500 ATK and DEF and is unaffected by spell cards, trap cards and monster effects. When this card is removed from the field, inflict 2000 points of damage to yourself and increase your opponent's life points by 2000. Once per turn, during your standby phase, pay 700 life points to keep this card on the field. If you cannot pay the life points needed to keep this card on the field, destroy this card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aibara Posted February 6, 2010 Report Share Posted February 6, 2010 A very good and balanced card( your monster gets very high ATK and DEF and a great effect, but you also lose a lot of LP) But there are a few OCG mistakes.(I think) For example, at the last sentence you could just say: if you can't do so, this card is destroyed. (I don't know if what I said is completely right, because I do tons of OCG mistakes in my cards, so...)I think you surely deserve 9/10!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teh ZWOOTS Posted February 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 6, 2010 A very good and balanced card( your monster gets very high ATK and DEF and a great effect' date=' but you also lose a lot of LP) But there are a few OCG mistakes.(I think) For example, at the last sentence you could just say: if you can't do so, this card is destroyed. (I don't know if what I said is completely right, because I do tons of OCG mistakes in my cards, so...)I think you surely deserve 9/10!!![/quote'] That sounds correct. I will fix it. Thank you for the rate and OCG correction. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aero~ Posted February 6, 2010 Report Share Posted February 6, 2010 told you about capitolization.light should be LIGHT. normal monster should be Normal Monster.Inflict 2000 damage to your Life Points, not yourself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teh ZWOOTS Posted February 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 6, 2010 Inflict 2000 damage to your Life Points' date=' not yourself.[/quote'] OMG!! I completely overlooked that!!! DX Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dante Dimercurio Posted February 6, 2010 Report Share Posted February 6, 2010 Picture: 10/10. It fits the effect. OCG: 8/10. told you about capitolization.light should be LIGHT. normal monster should be Normal Monster.Inflict 2000 damage to your Life Points' date=' not yourself.[/quote'] Total: 9/10. Not bad. Creative. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teh ZWOOTS Posted February 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 6, 2010 Picture: 10/10. It fits the effect. OCG: 8/10. told you about capitolization.light should be LIGHT. normal monster should be Normal Monster.Inflict 2000 damage to your Life Points' date=' not yourself.[/quote'] Total: 9/10. Not bad. Creative. Thanks!! That's what I was goin' for. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.