THE STRONGEST CARD EVER . HELL END DRAGON

[shadow wind]

LORE:To summon this card you must tribute 3 monster cards on your field. This card cannot attack the first turn it is summoned. Each turn this card is on the field you must discard 1 card from your hand and remove it from play , if you cannot discard any cards from your hand destroy this card. This card can be the only monster card on your side of the field. Once per turn this card can destroy one monster on the field. If this card is targeted by a spell, trap or monster effect , your opponent takes 1000 damage .

[Dream]

Firstly, uncapitalize the name of the card. There are OCG errors, but I can't be stuffed to point them out.

 

6/10

[Sp1at]

OCG fix:

To Summon this card you must tribute 3 monster cards on your field. This card cannot attack the first turn it is Summoned. Each turn this card is on the field you must discard 1 card from your hand and remove it from play , if you cannot discard any cards from your hand destroy this card. This card can be the only monster card on your side of the field. Once per turn this card can destroy one monster on the field. If this card is targeted by a Spell, Trap or monster effect , your opponent takes 1000 damage .

 

Anyway this card is a little OPed. its desint for a new member. But what the hell is with the all cap letters it does not work. Anyway i'll rate this 7/10

[Dranzer]

Capitalize the D in the type.I think this card is UP'd mostly because of the major requierments.

[Rampage567]

At least its not a divine beast.

[usetheforcehan]

"If this card is targeted by a spell, trap or monster effect, your opponent takes 1000 damage."

 

OP'd. You can simply use Equip Cards to this card and your opponent will lose 1000 LP. What you mean maybe "If this card is targeted by opponent's spell, trap or monster effect..." if not, then this card is truly OP'd.

[shadow wind]

I fixed it.....

lore:To Summon this card you must tribute 3 monster cards on your field. This card cannot attack the first turn it is Summoned. Each turn this card is on the field you must discard 1 card from your hand and remove it from play , if you cannot discard any cards from your hand destroy this card. This card can be the only monster card on your side of the field. Once per turn this card can destroy one monster on the field. If this card is targeted by an opponents Spell, Trap or monster effect , your opponent takes 1000 damage .

[ragnarok1945]

you want to burn your opponent by 1000 every time it's targeted by a card effect?

 

That's OPed as hell. You didn't even say it had to be your opponent's card effect, so you can drain like 4000 or more LP from your opponent in 1 turn this way

 

4/10

[-Griffin]

you want to burn your opponent by 1000 every time it's targeted by a card effect?

 

That's OPed as hell. You didn't even say it had to be your opponent's card effect' date=' so you can drain like 4000 or more LP from your opponent in 1 turn this way

 

4/10

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-FACEPALM-

Read the post DIRECTLY above yours.

 

It's hard to tell what the Summoning conditions mean, but this doesn't seem OP'd. Having to -1 yourself each turn, after a -3 Summon, for a slow beatstick, lolburn and +1 each turn might actually leave this UP'd since you lose such massive advantage.

[Archelaus]

Its been awhile since I rated a card so here goes:

FIX should be:

This card can only be Tribute Summoned by Tributing 3 monsters. This card cannot attack during the turn it is Summoned. When this card is Summoned, destroy all other monsters you control. Once per turn, you can destroy 1 monster on the field. If this card is targeted by a card effect, your opponent takes 1000 damage. During each of your End Phases, remove from play 1 card from your hand or destroy this card.

 

Hells End Dragon, a rather promising name. Your OCG needs help, but the OCG Thread can help you there. I just fixed the card's OCG.

 

IMO, lower the ATK to 4000 and the DEF to 3000~3200. Reduce the Burn Damage to a mere 500.

 

With those modifications, its balanced.

 

Because you basically,

-2 ~ -4 yourself when you summon it.

+1 with its destruction effect.

-1 during the End Phase.

 

Making it a minimum of a -2(minimum) up to -4(max) yourself during the turn it is summoned.

 

5/10-As of now.

 

9.2/10-With my modifications.

[shadow wind]

Its been awhile since I rated a card so here goes:

FIX should be:

This card can only be Tribute Summoned by Tributing 3 monsters. This card cannot attack during the turn it is Summoned. When this card is Summoned' date=' destroy all other monsters you control. Once per turn, you can destroy 1 monster on the field. If this card is targeted by a card effect, your opponent takes 1000 damage. During each of your End Phases, remove from play 1 card from your hand or destroy this card.

 

Hells End Dragon, a rather promising name. Your OCG needs help, but the OCG Thread can help you there. I just fixed the card's OCG.

 

IMO, lower the ATK to 4000 and the DEF to 3000~3200. Reduce the Burn Damage to a mere 500.

 

With those modifications, its balanced.

 

Because you basically,

-2 ~ -4 yourself when you summon it.

+1 with its destruction effect.

-1 during the End Phase.

 

Making it a minimum of a -2(minimum) up to -4(max) yourself during the turn it is summoned.

 

5/10-As of now.

 

9.2/10-With my modifications.

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read the one i fixed ( a few posts up ) if it says "If this card is targeted by a card effect, your opponent takes 1000 damage." then you can just equip spell cards to it and your opponent takes damage so i changed it to say " if this card is targeted by an opponents card effect , your opponent takes 100 damage.

[Archelaus]

Its been awhile since I rated a card so here goes:

FIX should be:

This card can only be Tribute Summoned by Tributing 3 monsters. This card cannot attack during the turn it is Summoned. When this card is Summoned' date=' destroy all other monsters you control. Once per turn, you can destroy 1 monster on the field. If this card is targeted by a card effect, your opponent takes 1000 damage. During each of your End Phases, remove from play 1 card from your hand or destroy this card.

 

Hells End Dragon, a rather promising name. Your OCG needs help, but the OCG Thread can help you there. I just fixed the card's OCG.

 

IMO, lower the ATK to 4000 and the DEF to 3000~3200. Reduce the Burn Damage to a mere 500.

 

With those modifications, its balanced.

 

Because you basically,

-2 ~ -4 yourself when you summon it.

+1 with its destruction effect.

-1 during the End Phase.

 

Making it a minimum of a -2(minimum) up to -4(max) yourself during the turn it is summoned.

 

5/10-As of now.

 

9.2/10-With my modifications.

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read the one i fixed ( a few posts up ) if it says "If this card is targeted by a card effect, your opponent takes 1000 damage." then you can just equip spell cards to it and your opponent takes damage so i changed it to say " if this card is targeted by an opponents card effect , your opponent takes 100 damage.

 

Its fine at 500. Making it at 100 kills the effect.

[shadow wind]

here i fixed it

lore:This card can only be Tribute Summoned by Tributing 3 monsters. This card cannot attack during the turn it is Summoned. When this card is Summoned, destroy all other monsters you control. Once per turn, you can destroy 1 monster on the field. If this card is targeted by a card effect, your opponent takes 500 damage. During each of your End Phases, remove from play 1 card from your hand or destroy this card.

[ChaosIncarn]

Its been awhile since I rated a card so here goes:

FIX should be:

This card can only be Tribute Summoned by Tributing 3 monsters. This card cannot attack during the turn it is Summoned. When this card is Summoned' date=' destroy all other monsters you control. Once per turn, you can destroy 1 monster on the field. If this card is targeted by a card effect, your opponent takes 1000 damage. During each of your End Phases, remove from play 1 card from your hand or destroy this card.

 

Hells End Dragon, a rather promising name. Your OCG needs help, but the OCG Thread can help you there. I just fixed the card's OCG.

 

IMO, lower the ATK to 4000 and the DEF to 3000~3200. Reduce the Burn Damage to a mere 500.

 

With those modifications, its balanced.

 

Because you basically,

-2 ~ -4 yourself when you summon it.

+1 with its destruction effect.

-1 during the End Phase.

 

Making it a minimum of a -2(minimum) up to -4(max) yourself during the turn it is summoned.

 

5/10-As of now.

 

9.2/10-With my modifications.

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Higher rate with YOUR fix indeed...

 

Like most have been saying, don't caps the whole name. "Hell End Dragon" is all you need there. As far as usefulness goes, I don't think I'd personally use this card. As seeing that the only real way it has to deal damage is the burn effect. The destroy effect helps with that, but not enough IMO.

 

I don't think it would be too overpowered to add pierce to this card. Or to at least switch it out for one of the other effects. There are plenty of cards around that don't directly target a monster to destroy it, so your opponent could still manage to dodge the 1000 damage burn.

 

Overall, it gets a 7/10 from me

[shadow wind]

Fixed it ...

lore:This card can only be Tribute Summoned by Tributing 3 monsters. This card cannot attack during the turn it is Summoned. When this card is Summoned, destroy all other monsters you control. Once per turn, you can destroy 1 monster on the field. If this card is targeted by a card effect, your opponent takes 500 damage. During each of your End Phases, remove from play 1 card from your hand or destroy this card.

[usetheforcehan]

Why do you decrease the damage from 1000 to 500 LP? This card has massive disadvantage:

1. Can only be Summoned with 3 Tribute. (HARD Summoning Condition)

2. When Summoned, destroy all monsters you control. (BAD You leave yourself open to an opponent's attack)

3. This card can be the only monster card on your field. (BAD Unable to Summon monsters to your field is always bad)

4. During your End Phases, remove from play 1 card from your hand or destroy this card. (SUPER BAD You basically reduced your chance of winning by discarding your hand)

 

The Good Side:

1. Once per turn, you can destroy 1 monster on the field. (GOOD But not so good, coz' you're only allowed to destroy a monster card not all type of cards (Spell and Trap will kill this card quickly))

2. Targeted by an opponent card effect, your opponent takes 500 damage. (GOOD Like Chaos says, There are plenty of cards around that don't directly target a monster to destroy it, and 500 damage is too small)

 

-4 vs +2 You better gives this card another advantage.