My first, actually posted, card - Blazing Hypnotist

[Ensenada]

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If you Synchro Summon a monster while this card is in your Graveyard, you can return this card to your Deck if the Synchro Summoned monster is Level 6 or lower. Once per turn, while this card is on the field, you can send it to the Graveyard to gain control of 1 monster your opponent controls until the End Phase.

 

I posted the effect for you too, in case you couldn't read it.

 

Opinions? It's not my first card ever, but the first one I've actually posted.[/align]

[ragnarok1945]

First sentence should be While this card is in the Graveyard, if you successfully Summon a Level 6 or higher Synchro monster you can return this card to your Deck. (plus I think this should be the last sentence in the text)

 

change gain control to take control

 

I guess it's a little bit more balanced for a mind control monster, unlike Brain Control which is OPed

 

8/10

[Wuu.]

Top of Deck, bottom of Deck, shuffle into Deck? You need to post that too.

It's useful, really impresive for a newcomer.

[Ensenada]

First sentence should be While this card is in the Graveyard' date=' if you successfully Summon a Level 6 or higher Synchro monster you can return this card to your Deck. (plus I think this should be the last sentence in the text)

 

change gain control to take control

 

I guess it's a little bit more balanced for a mind control monster, unlike Brain Control which is OPed

 

8/10

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For you OCG fix, that would actually make it an entirely different effect. And I said Level 6 or lower, not higher. You need to read the effect thoroughly ;-)

 

 

Top of Deck' date=' bottom of Deck, shuffle into Deck? You need to post that too.

It's useful, really impresive for a newcomer.

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I said I'm not a newcomer to Card Making, just to the forum ;-) But thanks. And as far as I'm aware, isn't teh shuffling part automatically? Which in turn means that listing that would just be pointless? I'm not sure though.

[Wuu.]

First sentence should be While this card is in the Graveyard' date=' if you successfully Summon a Level 6 or higher Synchro monster you can return this card to your Deck. (plus I think this should be the last sentence in the text)

 

change gain control to take control

 

I guess it's a little bit more balanced for a mind control monster, unlike Brain Control which is OPed

 

8/10

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For you OCG fix, that would actually make it an entirely different effect. And I said Level 6 or lower, not higher. You need to read the effect thoroughly ;-)

 

 

Top of Deck' date=' bottom of Deck, shuffle into Deck? You need to post that too.

It's useful, really impresive for a newcomer.

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I said I'm not a newcomer to Card Making, just to the forum ;-) But thanks. And as far as I'm aware, isn't teh shuffling part automatically? Which in turn means that listing that would just be pointless? I'm not sure though.

 

You have released cards saying "Return this card to the top of your Deck." and you have those saying "Return this card to the bottom of your Deck." And at last you have those saying, "Shuffle this card into your Deck."

Yeah. Pretty sure that needs to be included.

[Ensenada]

I'm still quite sure that it doesn't need to be listed, but you may be right. Let's see what other people say about it ;-)