Bounty Hunter VX Deck [My first card]

[WildFox2010]

Well I decided to try out making a deck. It will be called "Bounty Hunter VX". Its based on characters I created, Mephisto McGrath and Zamba Draak, Bounty hunters from a Future fantasy world. I will be planning on more soon, as some might be drawn and as you can see I can make some normal one out of pictures. But really my point here was to see how I can make a card and with you guys might think. So here the first card of the set, witch might be 40-45 cards total:

 

 

So from what I was planning, I wanted this deck to kinda fit the life of my Bounty hunters. Its all about thrills, parties, and cashing in. So the bulk of my deck will be mostly into supporting my two main characters, as for the rest, it be all about collecting lifepoints not only for the player, but take some from the opponent as well. The way I see the card, it the duo's party house. They like to have some wild parties in there but to get to the party, you get to pay the toll. :P

 

So, what you guys think? Is it a good start?

[ragnarok1945]

that is TOO realistic of a picture you got there, but it's your first so I'll let that go

 

lifepoints should be Life Points, summons should be Summons

 

the effect is bland, but it's a very good start for a new member, so you'll improve over time

 

7/10