Asderater - Phoenix Of White Fire

[D.V.D]

Asderater - Phoenix Of White Fire

 

This is my attempt at making a more balanced divine beast card. Any comments on making this card better, please post them.

 

 

Effect: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by tributing 1 monster, destroying one continuous or equip magic card and trap card. The attack and defense of this card are equal to the number of effect monsters in your graveyard X 400. You can pay any number of Life Points to increase this cards attack by the amount of Life Points payed. You can only activate this effect the turn this card is summoned. Pay 1000 Life Points to destroy all Spell and Trap cards on your opponents side of the field. You cannot conduct a battle Phase the turn this effect is activated. When this card is Special Summoned, choose one of the following effects: 1. This card is unaffected by effects of monster effects. 2. This card is unaffected by effects of trap cards. 3. This card is unaffected by effects of spell cards.

[Rampage567]

i personally dont like divine beasts, think there cheap

 

this ones good though

 

OP'ed

 

i give it a 7/10

[D.V.D]

Well I guess the card has to be a bit Oped comparing it to the Wicked Gods. If you can find a way to make it more balanced please tell me.

[ragnarok1945]

if you're going to boost this card's atk via LP pay, at least make it only 1 turn

 

magic and trap should be Spell and Trap

 

there's capitalization errors all over the text

 

there's virtually no drawbacks on this card at all, so I'll give this 6/10

[Blazer]

dont make DIVINE tributes.

 

Beside that amazing OCG for a new member.

 

I never thought I would do this. umm.. 7/10

[D.V.D]

ragnarok1945 : No draw backs? You pay 1000 Life Points to destroy the magic and traps and you cannot attack that turn. There are 2 draw backs their. I guess Ill change the effect to increase attack to only work for the first turn its summoned. All try to change all the errors I find.

 

Pokefan5678 : What do you suggest cause I also think that the effect is a bit over used. Maybe like a effect monster, a continuous spell card, a face up trap card and a monster in the graveyard and remove them from play.

[D.V.D]

OK changed. Changed a few errors, added the time limit for the increase attack effect and made the card harder to summon.