My First Cards

[JeramyZuta]

 

Each time your opponent draws a card(s), put 1 Spell Counter on this card (max 5). Increase the ATK of this card by 300 points for each Spell Counter on this card. If 5 Spell Counters are on this card, during the Standby Phase of your next turn, you can Special Summon 1 "Magician Brother" from your hand or Deck.

 

 

Each time your opponent draws a card(s), put 1 Spell Counter on this card (max 5). Increase the ATK of this card by 300 points for each Spell Counter on this card. If 5 Spell Counters are on this card, during the Standby Phase of your next turn, you can Special Summon 1 "Magician Sister" from your hand or Deck.

[ragnarok1945]

1st pic is bit overused, but it's your first cards so I'll let it go

 

the OCG is very good for a new member. The only error I found was deck has to be Deck in the 2nd card

 

for Magician's Brother though, 500 atk per counter is too much for this since it can hold a max of 5 counters. I'd lower the gain to 300 atk instead

 

9/10

[JeramyZuta]

1st pic is bit overused' date=' but it's your first cards so I'll let it go

 

the OCG is very good for a new member. The only error I found was deck has to be Deck in the 2nd card

 

for Magician's Brother though, 500 atk per counter is too much for this since it can hold a max of 5 counters. I'd lower the gain to 300 atk instead

 

9/10

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Thanks ill fix them in five mins XP

[ChaosIncarn]

Wow. After the fix, gotta say I like these cards. As Ragnarok said, for a new member, that's some great work in the OCG and concept.

 

You get a full 10/10 from me.

[JeramyZuta]

Wow. After the fix' date=' gotta say I like these cards. As Ragnarok said, for a new member, that's some great work in the OCG and concept.

 

You get a full 10/10 from me.

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Thank you Very much.