Teh ZWOOTS Posted February 7, 2010 Report Share Posted February 7, 2010 Lore?: There once was a brave knight. The greatest warrior in all the land. Many tried to defeat him. All were slew with ease. The knight had everything he could ever want. Riches, power, fame and a loving family. But, he lusted even more power. So he walked through the forest, wondering how to make himself even more powerful, and then he met a mysterious stranger. The stranger was dressed in a black robe and his face was concealed by a joker's mask. The knight, being as arrogant as he was, raised his sword to the stranger. He yelled "YOU THERE!!! GET OUT OF MY WAY OR I WILL CUT YOU DOWN!!!!!" The stranger remained silent for a few minutes and then replied with "I would gladly move out of your way, but, I sense that you desire something quite badly, and I think I can give it to you. What is it that you want?" Shocked, the knight stood there silently. After a minute or two he told the stranger he wanted to be stronger. The stranger lightly laughed and replied "Is that all? I will give you power beyond your wildest dreams. But you need to give me something." The knight, as power hungry and stupid as he was, simply yelled "I AGREE TO ANY TERMS!!! JUST GIVE ME MORE POWER!!!!". The stranger sighed and handed him a contract. The knight arrogantly signed it. Before the knight could say another word, the stranger was gone. Excited, he tried hitting a tree with his sword, seeing if the blade would leave a bigger cut. To the knight's disappointment, a normal sized cut was left in the tree. Angered, he stormed home. After a few hours of screaming and swearing, he fell asleep. When he woke up, he found himself in the middle of town, covered in blood, surrounded by dead bodies. It was obvious what happened, he got more power, but lost his mind. At first he was somewhat in control of his body, but that didn't last. After only a few years, the knight was gone. In his place, a hulking, mutated, monster that barely resembles the person it once was. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aero~ Posted February 7, 2010 Report Share Posted February 7, 2010 O_O you've prictically got 1/4 of a fan fic in that flavor text O_O O_O O_O O_O O_O9.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teh ZWOOTS Posted February 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 7, 2010 O_O you've prictically got 1/4 of a fan fic in that flavor text O_O O_O O_O O_O O_O9.9/10 Is that a good thing or a bad thing? xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aero~ Posted February 7, 2010 Report Share Posted February 7, 2010 O_O you've prictically got 1/4 of a fan fic in that flavor text O_O O_O O_O O_O O_O9.9/10 Is that a good thing or a bad thing? xD Both. Very descriptive, but you don't want it in the form of a story. It's a description. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teh ZWOOTS Posted February 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 7, 2010 O_O you've prictically got 1/4 of a fan fic in that flavor text O_O O_O O_O O_O O_O9.9/10 Is that a good thing or a bad thing? xD Both. Very descriptive' date=' but you don't want it in the form of a story. It's a description.[/quote'] Ah. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big-P Posted February 7, 2010 Report Share Posted February 7, 2010 PICS 10/10 OCG 3/10 overall 6.5/10 to much writing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teh ZWOOTS Posted February 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 7, 2010 PICS 10/10 OCG 3/10 overall 6.5/10 to much writing Vanillas don't have OCG. Which is a good reason why I hate them.... Anyway, thank you for the rate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deustodo Posted February 7, 2010 Report Share Posted February 7, 2010 WAY too long description, anyway, since its a vanilla I have to use another kind of rate, then I will give you a 6/10. Text too damn long.Picture isn't that good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teh ZWOOTS Posted February 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 7, 2010 WAY too long description' date=' anyway, since its a vanilla I have to use another kind of rate, then I will give you a 6/10. Text too damn long.Picture isn't that good.[/quote'] Thanks for the rate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dante Dimercurio Posted February 8, 2010 Report Share Posted February 8, 2010 So big!! Please no stories haha. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thecross Posted February 8, 2010 Report Share Posted February 8, 2010 Wow have not seen that beforewell i'd like to rate it but i don't rate stories unless their on anything but cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teh ZWOOTS Posted February 8, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 8, 2010 So big!! Please no stories haha. Don't worry, I won't do anything like this again. xP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightm@re-X Posted February 10, 2010 Report Share Posted February 10, 2010 Well....I liked the story a little ^^but it is supposed to be a description.anyways good pic good card 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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