DeathSDelano Posted February 8, 2010 Report Share Posted February 8, 2010 yes i'm making another set. (i changed the Arch name from Demon Lords to Otakurei) Please state OCG fixes, rate the card, and give feedback on how to make the cards better [spoiler=Lore]This card cannot be Normal Summoned. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 3 DARK monsters on your side of the field. Once per turn, discard 1 monster card from your hand to gain control of 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field whos Level is equal to or less than the Level of the discarded monster until End Phase. When this card is destroyed Special Summon 1 "Possesser Token"(Fiend-Type/DARK/Level 6/ATK 0/DEF 2000). The tokens cannot be used for Tribute. When the token is destroyed as a result of battle take control of the monster that destroyed it. During the End Phase that a token is destroyed you must discard or send the top card of your Deck to the Graveyard or give control of 1 monster on your side of the field to your opponent. [spoiler=lore]Once per turn, destroy 1 monster on your side of the field except this card to destroy 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field then inflict damage equal to half the ATK of the destroyed monsters. During each of your End Phases you may discard 1 Spell or Trap cards in your hand to inflict 200 damage to your opponent. [spoiler=effect]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 3 Dragon-Type monsters on your side of the field. Once per turn, you can discard 2 cards from your hand to destory all cards on the field except this card than place 1 Otakurei Counter on this card.(max 4.) During the turn you activate this effect you cannot conduct your Battle Phase. Decrease this card's ATK and DEF by x300 for each Otakurei Counter on it. [spoiler=effect]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 3 FIRE monsters on your side of the field. This card can attack all monsters on your opponent's side of the field once each with this card. While this card is in face-up Attack Position no other monster on your side of the field can attack. Once per turn, you may Tribute 1 monster on your side of the field to destroy 1 Spell or Trap card on your opponent's side of the field. During the turn you activate this effect you cannot activate or Set any Spell or Trap cards until your opponent's End Phase. [spoiler=lore]During your Standby Phase, you can Special Summon 1 "Golem Token" (Rock-Type/EARTH/Level 4/0/2000). The token cannot be used for Tribute Summon and cannot be used as Synchro material. During the turn you activate this effect you cannot Normal Summon or Set. Once per turn, you may Tribute any number of "Golem Tokens" to inflict x300 damage to your opponent for each "Golem Token" Tributed. During the turn you activate this effect you cannot conduct your Battle Phase. [spoiler=lore] Once per turn, discard 3 cards from your hand to destroy all cards on the field except this card than add 1 Thunder Otakurei Counter this card.(max 3) During the turn you activate this effect you cannot conduct your Battle Phase. Increase this card's ATK x200 per Thunder Otakurei Counter on this card. [spoiler=lore] If this card attacks a face-down Defense Position Monster, destroy the monster immediately with this card's effect without flipping it face-up or applying damage calculation. Each time a monster is destroyed by this effect place 1 Thunder Otakurei Counter on this card.(max 3) Increase this card's ATK x200 per Thunder Otakurei Counter on this card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeathSDelano Posted February 8, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 8, 2010 This thread feels lonely w/o anyone wanting to help out :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted February 8, 2010 Report Share Posted February 8, 2010 Can't see any true OCG errors, but the idea is a little overdone. Not sure what else to say. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeathSDelano Posted February 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 9, 2010 The archtype name(if it is i'll find another name for it) or the Effects? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted February 9, 2010 Report Share Posted February 9, 2010 The archtype name(if it is i'll find another name for it) or the Effects? Name and general idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeathSDelano Posted February 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 9, 2010 name changed and what General Idea i did not have a general idea for this ?-? than again i never do on my sets XD i just make the effects as i make the cards themselves so not much thought process goes in before the effects are made they are made as i type them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ayasato-chan Posted February 9, 2010 Report Share Posted February 9, 2010 Not a bad set. I'm not one for Fiends (I run them anyway... XD.) But yeah, I like these. OCG seems fine, very minimal if not easily overlookable errors. Pics fit the effects and names... But why Otakurei? Why not Akuma-Ou or something to that effect? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeathSDelano Posted February 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 9, 2010 i just kinda made it up but mixin some japanese words up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ayasato-chan Posted February 9, 2010 Report Share Posted February 9, 2010 The name makes absolutely no sense is why I'm asking. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeathSDelano Posted February 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 9, 2010 Akurei means evil spiritOt - has no meaning that i know of XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chas2448 Posted February 9, 2010 Report Share Posted February 9, 2010 i like the pictures, they are pretty cool, but one thing, (i am not sure if i am right but here it goes) with the multi destroyer guy, part of his effect says: This card can attack all monsters on your opponent's side of the field ; but i think it should say somthin like this : This card can attack all monsters on your opponent's side of the field once per turn ; like i said not sure if iam right, i think i am right because the monster could attack any of them but not every one of them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeathSDelano Posted February 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 12, 2010 Its not "Once per turn" (i'm looking at Ultimate Tyranno now) it says "attack all monsters on your opponent's side of the field once each with this card." so i'll add that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ayasato-chan Posted February 12, 2010 Report Share Posted February 12, 2010 Akurei means evil spiritOt - has no meaning that i know of XD Well then, name them Akurei-Ou, which translates as "Evil Spirit King". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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