THEChanger Posted February 9, 2010 Report Share Posted February 9, 2010 So, guess who's new here?There are probably many OCG errors. Please be kind.I claim no ownership of these images. Most are from one of Father Wolf's galleries. A few are from Waverly. And Palidin is from JazinKay, if I remember correctly. If I missed an image from you, and you want me to give you credit, post so.1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersThis card gains 500 ATK for each "Falling Star" monster on the field. You can tribute a "Falling Star" monster on your field to destroy one of your opponet's cards. If you do this, this card can not attack this turn.This monster can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card "Fall of the Great Star". When this card is Summoned, Special Summon two "Falling Star Tokens"(Fiend-Type/DARK/Level 1/ATK 500/DEF 500) to your opponet's field. This card gains 200 Attack for every token on the field. By discarding a card from your hand, this card can attack twice this turn.This monster can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card "Fall of the Great Star". When this monster is Summoned, Special Summon a "Falling Star Token"(Fiend-Type/DARK/Level 1/ATK 500/DEF 500) to your field. This card inflicts piercing damage. When this card inflicts damage to your opponet, you can destroy one of your opponents Spell or Trap cards.This monster can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Fall of the Great Star". When this card is Summoned, Special Summon one "Falling Star Token"(Fiend-Type/DARK/Level 1/ATK 500/DEF 500) to your side of the field. When in Defence Position, this card can not be destroyed as a result of battle. When this card is the target of a Spell or Trap card, inflict 500 points of damage to your Life Points, and Special Summon a "Falling Star Token"(Fiend-Type/DARK/Level 1/ATK 500/DEF 500).*New Card* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HangetsuHozuki Posted February 9, 2010 Report Share Posted February 9, 2010 OCG for some of the Synchros is off. I like the pics though. 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
THEChanger Posted February 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 9, 2010 Hmmm . . . yes . . . could you correct the OCG, so I know how it is suppossed to be written?Thank you for your rating. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
THEChanger Posted February 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 Bump, bump, bump-bump-bump, bump, bump, bump-bump-bump.William Tell Overature bump! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DigiMaster Ragnarok Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 TERRIBLE OCG, and I mean TERRIBLE!!! I'd correct it, but it would take 4EVA to point all of them out. Pics are pretty good on most, but sum not so much. Abilities are either OPed or just rediculous. 0.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
THEChanger Posted February 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 TERRIBLE OCG' date=' and I mean TERRIBLE!!! I'd correct it, but it would take 4EVA to point all of them out. Pics are pretty good on most, but sum not so much. Abilities are either OPed or just rediculous. 0.5/10[/quote']You are more than welcome to say that my cards are not good, but I would greatly prefer it if you'd atleast point out some places where the OCG is glaringly obvious, or why a certain card is Oped.After all, I am new, these are my first cards, and I come to learn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmc1234 Posted February 16, 2010 Report Share Posted February 16, 2010 Some ocg as some had said. You need to put " " around names of card like "Fallen Star" Dont say points of damage just say damage. EX: "inflict 400 damage to your opponent" Dont say Attack points or Defense points just say ATK and DEF. EX: "This card gains 500 ATK" Dont say "This Fallen Star Dragon can..." Just say "This card". EX: This card can... Also some pics are also Wanderley's so give credit Some are op'd so add a summoning condition like requring a Tribute, you having to do with you removing from play a card. Also Lower the ATK and DEF on ones that are op'd and Drop some levels on the card because some are unnecessary like the Fallen Star Chimera. Also there is an ocg thread for help so you can always refer to that. Its in the R.C Hope that helps. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
THEChanger Posted February 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 16, 2010 Thank you cmc. Fixes begin tommorrow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmc1234 Posted February 16, 2010 Report Share Posted February 16, 2010 no prob cant wait to see them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
THEChanger Posted February 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 Some fixes to Ritual OCG and Token summoning OCG have been made. I think I got it right this time. Overpowered 4-star has Life Point cost every turn he is left in Fac-Up Attak Position. Scion now deals damage to whoever the tokens he destroys belong to. I think I got his OCG right, but if someone could check for me, that would be nice. Also, new card, Falling Star Palidin. Serves to protect his fellow Falling Star monsters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 21, 2010 Report Share Posted February 21, 2010 the OCG fixes are up already, mostly it's just too wordy anyway with regards to them being OPed, for the most part it's just because there's no specific summoning condition, so that's easy to fix 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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