♠Decietful King♠ Posted February 9, 2010 Report Share Posted February 9, 2010 [align=center][spoiler=Lore]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 1 "Red Dragon Archfiend". This card gains 200 DEF for every Trap Card in your Graveyard. When this monster destroys a monster in defense position you can inflict direct damage equal to a quarter of this monsters DEF. You can remove this card from play to destroy every monster your opponent controls. If you use this effect then you Special Summon 1 "Red Dragon Archfiend" that has been removed from play and draw 1 card.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sp1at Posted February 9, 2010 Report Share Posted February 9, 2010 OCG is perfect. It has a nice effect. Its kind of OPed make it a 10 Star. I Like it 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nitro Death Posted February 9, 2010 Report Share Posted February 9, 2010 Ok, no offense, the picture doesn't really fit the name. if it's White Archfiend, it needs to be mostly white. OCG: instead of "Every monster your opponent controls", make it "All monsters on your opponents side of the field." and you could make it instead of "Special sommon one REd Dragon Archfiend" when you use it's effect, make it so you have to pay 2000 Life Points or something. It's just my opinion. But still 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sp1at Posted February 9, 2010 Report Share Posted February 9, 2010 actally it is white look at it closely. Its White and Red. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nitro Death Posted February 9, 2010 Report Share Posted February 9, 2010 Sure, but it needs to be more White then Red. It's "The White Archfiend" not "the Red/White Archfiend" Still ok though, it's just my opinion on it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠Decietful King♠ Posted February 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 9, 2010 [align=center]Ok' date=' no offense, the picture doesn't really fit the name. if it's White Archfiend, it needs to be mostly white. OCG: instead of "Every monster your opponent controls", make it "All monsters on your opponents side of the field." and you could make it instead of "Special sommon one REd Dragon Archfiend" when you use it's effect, make it so you have to pay 2000 Life Points or something. It's just my opinion. But still 8/10[/quote'] Actually this OCG is the correct form; and for your suggestion I was trying to make it so it would bring out RDA instead of itself like most new card's do.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Percival Cox Posted February 9, 2010 Report Share Posted February 9, 2010 I posted my RDA support too late you got to it first....*looks at effect* and its alittle better than mine DX 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠Decietful King♠ Posted February 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 9, 2010 Lol thnx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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