fear of pain Posted February 9, 2010 Report Share Posted February 9, 2010 Well i guess these shoeldn't come in my upcomming Structure Deck "Bound To Hell" (check my other threat) since its already overpowered enough as it is. If your oponnent conducts its Battle Phase against this monster, decrease that monsters ATK by its level x 100 (Damage calculation is applied normally). If a monster on your side of the field is send to your Graveyard while this card is in play, pay Life Points equal to the send monsters level x 100 to move it to your field in face-up Attack Position. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by tributing 2 DARK Zombie-Type monsters you control wich level stars equal 8 or more. Each turn durring your Battle Phase you may sacrifise 1 Zombie-Type monster you control to destroy all monsters on your oponnent's side of the field with an ATK equal to or less then the send monster. When this card is Special Summoned by the effect of a Spell Card, Special Summon 1 DARK/Zombie-Type/Lv4 monster from your hand or Graveyard. Discart 2 cards each of your Main Phases to Increase the ATK of the Summoned monster by 1000 points for as long as this card is in play. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned When "A Spiritual Gentleman" is in your Graveyard. When this card is Summoned, Special Summon 1 DARK/Zombie-Type/Lv4 monster from your hand or Graveyard. Equip the Summoned Monster to this card as an Equip Spell Card. Increase this cards ATK by 1000 and inflict the difference in ATK as direct damage to your oponnent's Life Points. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Shaymin:. Posted February 9, 2010 Report Share Posted February 9, 2010 Meh Pics Make a card lore 4/10 (until I read the effects) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nitro Death Posted February 9, 2010 Report Share Posted February 9, 2010 Yeah, you really should type the lore, and as for the "Illias Monas" if it has 2850 ATK and DEF, then it should kinda have 9 stars, or some sort of downside effect. Also in Skeleton king, Sacrifse = Sacrifice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
THEChanger Posted February 9, 2010 Report Share Posted February 9, 2010 Allow me, .:Shaymin:.,Master of Reanimation: If a monster conducts it's Battle Phase against this card, decrease that monster's ATK by it's level x100.(Damage Calculation is applied normally){I don't think monsters have Battle Phases} If a monster on your side of the field is send to your Graveyard while this card is in play, pay life points equal to the send monster's level x 100 to move it to your hand.{your side of the field is now your field, I don't think "while this card is in play" is needed, sent.} Skeleton King: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by tributing 2 DARK Zombie-Type monsters you control wich level stars equal 8 or more.{which, not wich.} Every Main Phase, sacrifise{sacrifice?} 1 DARK Zombie-Type monster you control, and Special Summon 1 DARK Zombie-Type monster of equal stars or less from your Graveyard to your side of the field in Attack Position. And now for rates.Master of Reincarnation:OCG errors that I caught. First part of the effect is alright, though it probably won't help against a monster with more than 2600 ATK anyway. Second is Under-powered. I would bring it back to the field in Attack Position. 6/10.Illias Monas: Mis-spelled rich. Flavor text is meh. A nice, powerful Normal Zombie. Don't see many of those. 7/10.Skeleton King: So, you have to activate his Special Summoning effect? Also, this effect has been done by Vampire Genisis. You made a weaker, harder to summon version of an existing card. 3/10 because I like the pic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aldebaram Posted February 9, 2010 Report Share Posted February 9, 2010 sucking Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ff00I Posted February 9, 2010 Report Share Posted February 9, 2010 could be better, some minor errors, reasonable pics7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Shaymin:. Posted February 9, 2010 Report Share Posted February 9, 2010 Alright official Rating 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fear of pain Posted February 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 9, 2010 Meh Pics Make a card lore 4/10 (until I read the effects)Card lore added.Yeah' date=' you really should type the lore, and as for the "Illias Monas" if it has 2850 ATK and DEF, then it should kinda have 9 stars, or some sort of downside effect. Also in Skeleton king, Sacrifse = Sacrifice[/quote'] Thanks, i forgot the I in sacrifise i guess. As for "Illias Monas" i must say i think its still reasonable to be a level 8 monster, since the existing card "Spiral Serpent" is a lvl 8 monster with 2900 ATK and DEF. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmc1234 Posted February 9, 2010 Report Share Posted February 9, 2010 Sacrifice= Tribute. tribute= Tribute. some ocg errors maybe go to the ocg thread for some help. i dont mind Normal Monsters but most dont so maybe add an effetc to it, good pics though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fear of pain Posted February 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 9, 2010 Allow me' date=' .:Shaymin:.,Master of Reanimation: If a monster conducts it's Battle Phase against this card, decrease that monster's ATK by it's level x100.(Damage Calculation is applied normally){I don't think monsters have Battle Phases} If a monster on your side of the field is send to your Graveyard while this card is in play, pay life points equal to the send monster's level x 100 to move it to your hand.{your side of the field is now your field, I don't think "while this card is in play" is needed, sent.} Skeleton King: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by tributing 2 DARK Zombie-Type monsters you control wich level stars equal 8 or more.{which, not wich.} Every Main Phase, sacrifise{sacrifice?} 1 DARK Zombie-Type monster you control, and Special Summon 1 DARK Zombie-Type monster of equal stars or less from your Graveyard to your side of the field in Attack Position. And now for rates.Master of Reincarnation:OCG errors that I caught. First part of the effect is alright, though it probably won't help against a monster with more than 2600 ATK anyway. Second is Under-powered. I would bring it back to the field in Attack Position. 6/10.Illias Monas: Mis-spelled rich. Flavor text is meh. A nice, powerful Normal Zombie. Don't see many of those. 7/10.Skeleton King: So, you have to activate his Special Summoning effect? Also, this effect has been done by Vampire Genisis. You made a weaker, harder to summon version of an existing card. 3/10 because I like the pic.[/quote'] THEChanger, thanks for fixing the few OGC errors and for the advise. As for "Skeleton King", I'm sorry. I've already seen Vampire Genesis many times yet i didn't know he already had an identic effect. I've changed its effect now.Thanks for "Illias Monas" rating, i agree. As for "master of Reincarnation", i disagree with you about the first part. can you explain me why it probably won't help against monster with more than 2600 ATK ?If for example...Blue eyes Attacks this card, its ATK would be decreased by its level x 100 (8x100=800). That makes 2200 ATK. It would be destroyed now right ? Please explain.Added 2 new cards: "A Spiritual Gentleman" and "A Spiritual Reaper" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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