Ensenada Posted February 9, 2010 Report Share Posted February 9, 2010 [align=center]1 Warrior-Type monster + "Mechomorph Substance"The ATK and DEF of this card is equal to the ATK and DEF of the Warrior-Type monster used for the Fusion Summon of this monster +500. When this card is Summoned, place 1 Substance Token on this card (Max. 3). When this card would be destroyed, you can remove 1 Substance Token from this card to negate the destruction of this card. A ball composed of a mysterious liquid metal, that defies all the laws of reality. It may have untold potential, but for now, it's just an unusable ball. I admit, the the Fusion Material vanilla is really just a poor excuse, but I had no real ideas for a good effect. Opinions on at least the first card?[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aldebaram Posted February 9, 2010 Report Share Posted February 9, 2010 lol tey suck :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Griffin Posted February 9, 2010 Report Share Posted February 9, 2010 I'd make the first a contact fusion to make it runnable.Other than that, it's hard to comment on what looks like an incomplete set. Why max 3 counters when it will only ever get 1? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted February 9, 2010 Report Share Posted February 9, 2010 lol tey suck :( I just loved how you gave criticism on his cards. Great work. =/Don't post in a CC Thread if you have no criticism or such for the TC. Now, my turn.The effect for the Fusion Monster is quite awkward. It says it has a Max of 3 Counters, but it can only be Summoned once, giving it's Counter #1. However, when a card is destroyed, unless stated by the effect, the counters are destroyed as well. So when this card is Summoned again, it gains only 1 Counter. After all, it doesn't say where it is going to get it's other 2 Counters. Till then, that Max 3 needs to be taken out. Unless you have some support for this Fusion Monster.You may want to fix up on that. The Pictures seem pretty good. OCG doesn't seem too bad, minus the Counter screw-up. Please do make support cards for these. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aldebaram Posted February 9, 2010 Report Share Posted February 9, 2010 THX :DD:D:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted February 9, 2010 Report Share Posted February 9, 2010 THX :DD:D:D You have a horrible sarcasm detector. Fix it or get a new one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ensenada Posted February 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 9, 2010 Aldebaram, would you please, excuse my language, GTFO of my thread if you have nothing decent to say. And Griffin and Enrise, I just noticed that I forgot to add a way to get extra Counters. Major screw up. I also realized that I wrote Tokens instead of Counters. I deserve to be punched. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted February 9, 2010 Report Share Posted February 9, 2010 I really love the pics.I see no OCG flaws.Effect is ok, but a bit to Up. Maybe do what was suggested earlyer.Name of the first just seems wrong.A 8.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aldebaram Posted February 9, 2010 Report Share Posted February 9, 2010 i dun now wat sarcasm is :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted February 9, 2010 Report Share Posted February 9, 2010 i dun now wat sarcasm is :( First off, your grammar. That may be a reason.Or, you're still in Elementary School. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aldebaram Posted February 9, 2010 Report Share Posted February 9, 2010 i am 6. :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted February 9, 2010 Report Share Posted February 9, 2010 i am 6. :( 6th Grade or 6 years old?Clarify also. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ensenada Posted February 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 9, 2010 If he's 6, he seriously shouldn't be on this forum. He shouldn't even have a computer. I know no 6-year-olds who have a computer. And Lexadin, I already found out myself that I had OCG errors, but thanks anyways =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aldebaram Posted February 9, 2010 Report Share Posted February 9, 2010 6 yar. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted February 9, 2010 Report Share Posted February 9, 2010 If he's 6' date=' he seriously shouldn't be on this forum. He shouldn't even have a computer. I know no 6-year-olds who have a computer. And Lexadin, I already found out myself that I had OCG errors, but thanks anyways =D[/quote'] I had a computer when I was 6 =o 6 yar. Yeah... I can tell........Fix your grammar. Please? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aldebaram Posted February 9, 2010 Report Share Posted February 9, 2010 my gramar iz right Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scatty Posted February 9, 2010 Report Share Posted February 9, 2010 I have only 1 thing to say: there are no...laws of reality!!!!!!! And there are 4 metals that melt in your hand, so it's nothing new. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RAEGING D0GKING Posted February 9, 2010 Report Share Posted February 9, 2010 Give an effect to Mechomorph SubstanceSaying that Once per turn, while this card is in your graveyard, you can Discard 1 card to add 1 "Substance" Counter on a face-up Mechomorph Ultrarmour. The pics are nice where did you get them? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ensenada Posted February 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 9, 2010 Aldebaran, you grammar is not right. Versitality, please comment on the card if you post. Although I know that you're right, I'm not entirely stupid ;-) But I had to write something. Santa's Little Helper, isn't Christmas over now? No, sorry, stupid joke. As for the pics, I found them on Photobucket. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aldebaram Posted February 9, 2010 Report Share Posted February 9, 2010 of corse its Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted February 9, 2010 Report Share Posted February 9, 2010 Your mother telling you that you have good grammar is not a valid reason. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aldebaram Posted February 9, 2010 Report Share Posted February 9, 2010 my fater said 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted February 9, 2010 Report Share Posted February 9, 2010 my fater said 2 Even more so.Listen kid. When you have that kind of grammar, the way it is now, in Middle School or Higher, you're going to fail. Badly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wuu. Posted February 9, 2010 Report Share Posted February 9, 2010 Lol, he doesn't even know what grammar is. As for the Fusion Monster i only have to say one thing, which has been mentioned by -Griffin(Darn you, Griffin!) It's that it needs contact fusion to be able to be runned.OCG is OK.(Permanent) beatstick FTW? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aldebaram Posted February 9, 2010 Report Share Posted February 9, 2010 grammar is a typ of bee noob Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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