bennzaskz Posted December 18, 2007 Report Share Posted December 18, 2007 [/size][/font] Vote if u like ma void cards. They could be real yu-gi-oh cards if thre woz a place in which u could pay and get ur card made into a real 1.!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arpeejajo Posted December 18, 2007 Report Share Posted December 18, 2007 Okay, I've got a few things to say.Well before I say any of that, don't take any of the ofensively. It is constructive criticism. 1. That pic is Infernal Dragon.2. You have a description of the card as a part of the effect.3. OVERPOWERED.4. Bad grammar.Nice try, but maybe you should look at other cards and see how they are. Keep practicing and you'll eventually get better. You should read the guides on making cards properly and stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aretha Posted December 18, 2007 Report Share Posted December 18, 2007 Overpowered, bad OCG, the pic for your second card is already used in the TCG, and there's flavour text in an effect monster. You do have confidence, though. 4/10 Just keep practicing your OCG and balance out your cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exiro Posted December 18, 2007 Report Share Posted December 18, 2007 This isn't like magic. A monster has either flavor text OR an effect, not both.Also, be a little clear about the offering. Can you offer cards from your hand to summon him? 4.2/10 sorry :\ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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