danazone

[phantom12]

can you tell me whats wrong with the grammar and they were the only pictures i could find.

[.:Shaymin:.]

can you tell me whats wrong with the grammar and they were the only pictures i could find.

 

okay its not the grammar

 

its the effects

 

they need to stand out

 

they need to be interesting

[phantom12]

thx

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i fixed this card is it better?

 

[Dante Dimercurio]

The space between the effect is not needed...

 

I can't read the effect.

[phantom12]

how do i make the text bigger?

[Where are my COOKIES]

how do i make the text bigger?

 

On the card? because it just makes itself any size on the card.

[phantom12]

k

is this new card good.

 

[Where are my COOKIES]

Pic has words. Fake type (get rid of dark-). OCG errors. Effect has been used alot

 

5-10

[phantom12]

k i fixed some stuff but i like the effect

 

[.:Shaymin:.]

please edit you post

 

if you want to know how

 

PM Me And I will teach you

[Robert123CK]

Phantom CAPITALIZE THE WORDS AT THE START OF SENTENCES! and USE SPELL CHECK! (on chronomon) and give it 1 or 2 more stars. otherwise good job!

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you'll get better at it with experience.

[phantom12]

I UPDATED THE cards and added some new ones

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dorimon

 

doru courage crest

 

blade ear

 

dorugamon

 

dorumon-warrior

 

dorumon

 

chronomon dm

 

Chrono DM Boost

 

magnamon x

[phantom12]

my booster pack

i couldn't find another way to get the image on to here

 

dorimon

 

doru courage crest

 

blade ear

 

dorugamon

 

dorumon-warrior

 

dorumon

 

chronomon dm

 

Chrono DM Boost

 

magnamon x

 

gummymon

 

cardmon u2

[.:Shaymin:.]

Please edit your post

 

This is getting very annoying

 

^ _ ^

[phantom12]

k i keep forgetting to

[Nightm@re-X]

DUDE FIX THE OCG!HORRIBLE PICS!EDIT YOUR POST X-X!

 

-infinity/10

[phantom12]

new cards

 

Cardmon U2 - Out Of Control

 

dorimon - out of control

[.:Shaymin:.]

new cards

 

Cardmon U2 - Out Of Control

 

dorimon - out of control

 

NO Fake Types

 

Cardmon WTF

 

Effects make no sense

 

OP'ed for sure

 

1/10 Effort

[phantom12]

i put them that strong because when they destroy another monster they are destroyed

[BEAT ME]

way to OVERPOWERED.

 

 

PICS have no background

 

OCG looks like its been done by a BABY.

 

3/10

[phantom12]

can you point out whats wrong with the ocg

[Xenogears]

can you point out whats wrong with the ocg

 

Go check it to a real Yu-Gi-Oh card.

[Robert123CK]

Don't listen to Shaymin use fake types. That's why you aren't in realistic cards. They don't have to have real types.

[Lisyo]

if you do that you need to make other cards that help that type of cards.. >.< it will me some people heads hurt :3 *as myself*

[Robert123CK]

Your mistakes:

 

Dorimon: Instead of ‘When dorimon is used to tune the synchro monster gains 500 atk.’ it should be ‘When this card is used to tune a synchro monster it gains 500 ATK.’

 

Doru Courage Crest: Instead of ‘Use to summon monsters that must be summoned with doru courage crest. Levels do not apply.’ it should be ‘You may summon any monster that must be summoned with this card.’ (I don’t understand the last part.)

 

Blade Ear: Instead of ‘a rabbit with blade ears’ it should be ‘A rabbit with blade ears.’ (I think it should be beast type and horrible picture by the way.)

 

Dorugamon: Instead of ‘When dorugoramon wins a battle other moNsters you control gain 100 def. Summon with doru courage crest.’ it should be ‘When this card wins a battle other monsters you control gain 100 DEF.’ (It should just be dragon type and should be a ritual card. If you want info on ritual cards look up Relinquished.)