carhlocb Posted February 10, 2010 Report Share Posted February 10, 2010 this is my first card: please comment and tell me if something is wrong. :D:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JIMMYTRON Posted February 10, 2010 Report Share Posted February 10, 2010 did u inverse this image?!?...anyway...you could've said that "This card inficts piercing damage." for the first part of the effect...and y should your opponent draw a card too? 7/10~Good job though for a LVL 1 Member [align=right]Good Job To Ya Dawg (insert X-Zibit Pic here dawg),JIMMYTRON[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
carhlocb Posted February 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 10, 2010 thanks for the help Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JIMMYTRON Posted February 10, 2010 Report Share Posted February 10, 2010 no prob...but dont completly trust me w/ OCG help bc im not the best, but i can help...if you need more just ask a member who has a lot of stars XD haha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
carhlocb Posted February 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 10, 2010 ok thanks anyway Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Shaymin:. Posted February 10, 2010 Report Share Posted February 10, 2010 Now here is a serious rating The pic is not Hi-Res OCG Errors This card should be a Level 7 monster 5.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted February 10, 2010 Report Share Posted February 10, 2010 last sentence should be "When this card is destroyed by battle, both players draw 1 card" Pic is blurry but and JIMMYTRON have pointed out the first sentence, you could write as you did but it's easier to say this card inflicts piercing damage. Good card for a Level 1 member 9/10 cause you are a new member Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
carhlocb Posted February 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 10, 2010 ok thanks for the suggestions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Articuno~ Posted February 10, 2010 Report Share Posted February 10, 2010 I think this is great. Inverse thingymajig is cool,OCG is okay,but of course not everyone gets it perfect on their 1st try. 8.5/10 for your 1st card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
carhlocb Posted February 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 10, 2010 thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
carhlocb Posted February 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 please rate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rusty Shovel Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 Lore fix: This card inflicts Piercing Damage. When this card is destroyed as a result of battle you and your Opponent draw one card. Hi-Five! Good job for a new member! 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blazer Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 Its good for your first. At first line make defence DEF Capolization errors. One comment, My first card wat 30* worse, ill give you that much. Keep it up and you'll be good. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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