Tyrant Phoenix Posted December 18, 2007 Report Share Posted December 18, 2007 Tyrantking10 hereHey, sorry bout the previous posts and all... I was in a rather, shallow feeling at the time. But, im not going to be so unorthodoxed to blame people. I guess it just takes time to get realized. Well, here are the WAR BORN! Their finished so far!... till I... add some interesting support for them in future packsMonsters... Spells... Traps... Big Monsters...: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyrant Phoenix Posted December 19, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 19, 2007 bumpy... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 19, 2007 Report Share Posted December 19, 2007 hmmm, its Battle Phase my friend, and Graveyard needs to be capitalized, but i do like the spunk in you, so you get a 8/10 =) keep up the good effort! 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Slime Lord Posted December 19, 2007 Report Share Posted December 19, 2007 Well here I am. :P Besides a few OCG and grammatical issues, not bad. Not bad at all. When making realistic cards, use real types (not '?'s or duals). I saw some subject and verb disagreement (ignore my spelling :P), but I didn't really notice until I read over it twice. I usually don't comment on art, but I liked it a lot. Is most it from the same artist? Its pretty cool. I've used the art for War Born Malice, Monster Freedom, and Soul Exchanging Blade of the Abyss before. I actually don't know what to rate the entire set only because there are a lot of cards, and I truthfully don't want to analyze every single card. :P I mainly skimmed through all of them a few times, and if anything big popped up (nothing too big), I addressed it. Anyway, good job and good effort. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyrant Phoenix Posted December 19, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 19, 2007 Not sure which card has the grammatical mess up there bloodrun. I went over every card bout 5 times to see that. Also, i purposly stated which i wanted the effects to accumulate, battle step, damage step, whatnot. If i forgot to capatalize Battle Phase, or graveyard or what not, i was just to lazy, and i thought people would really care less about that. And Spunk? and just good effort?... And slime lord, I sort of agree, I might change Malice and Brutality.. but that was just to make things interesting. Malice is suppose to be from the hatred of the fallen War Born.. so i thought fuse them all, in a certain way in a vague ball of death lol... why not mix types? Somewhat yes on artists. Its also, in my eyes, not entirely fair to just judge with skimming through cards. Just looking at the bigger, shinier cards doesnt mean their nessecarly the winning streak cards eh? Look at Treeborn... just a simple rare.. 8/10 bloodrun?... sigh... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 19, 2007 Report Share Posted December 19, 2007 ok Soulmaster, your assassin card, your Warrior trap card, they have to have their Graveyards caped, and your very first card, says Battle Step, its really usualy written as Battle PHase, but its ok, and yes, 8/10, even though its a set, and usualy give higher rating on bigger sets, which yours is pretty big, most of these effects, i have seen multiple times, but dont let my rating get you down, at all! from the llooks of it, you are turning out to be a very talented card maker =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Slime Lord Posted December 19, 2007 Report Share Posted December 19, 2007 I read all of them. Just not very carefully. I was reading effects, not looking for huge problems like I used to do. That just kinda ruined the experience of looking at custom cards. And about the subject verb disagreement, I could have sworn I saw something in War Born Whip, but I guess not. My bad. :oops: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyrant Phoenix Posted December 19, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 19, 2007 War Born Whip and War Born Boar are a combo almost. Leading to it, the opponent enters the battle phase right? They have 2 monsters in attack position, they attempt to attack Boar. The attack is redirected. The battle step comes in ... ahh crud... i should rename it Damage Step, thus... Soulmancer and Assassin have nothing to do with the battle-phase... I didnt realize that someone already sort of made these... and by the looks of things, things are getting me down sort of... Was wondering what you meant by that slime... The Main stragety that i think no one is really seeing, is that the War Born monsters heavily revolve around the Battle-Phase, and not only that, but not only do they have a certain effect to the amount of their own kind existing, but what is on your opponent's side. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted December 19, 2007 Report Share Posted December 19, 2007 Work on some grammar problems, but otherwise, pretty cool! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyrant Phoenix Posted December 19, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 19, 2007 Again, Grammar Problems? Please points out at least a good number of them. Im rather getting fustrated with the comments of grammar, for I fail to find any. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 19, 2007 Report Share Posted December 19, 2007 War Born Whip and War Born Boar are a combo almost. Leading to it' date=' the opponent enters the battle phase right? They have 2 monsters in attack position, they attempt to attack Boar. The attack is redirected. The battle step comes in ... ahh crud... i should rename it Damage Step, thus... Soulmancer and Assassin have nothing to do with the battle-phase... I didnt realize that someone already sort of made these... and by the looks of things, things are getting me down sort of... Was wondering what you meant by that slime...[/quote'] no no, people didnt actually per say, make these cards as in the one you have, they just have simaliar effects, just a tad bit differences, but why would they be getting you down? i mean, i can under stand the circumstances, but you have keep head up, man lol, the users here are like piranahas (killed the spelling i know) they smell fear! lol, in some less caluclated terms, they do. so just take head of what i said, and you should do just fine! =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Slime Lord Posted December 19, 2007 Report Share Posted December 19, 2007 but why would they be getting you down? i mean' date=' i can under stand the circumstances, but you have keep head up, man lol, the users here are like piranahas (killed the spelling i know) they smell fear! [/quote'] Meh, not really. Most just like to repeat what has already been said so they can increase their post count. :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyrant Phoenix Posted December 19, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 19, 2007 Its just... To be honest bloodrun? I find most peoples things... somewhat uninteresting, cuz of a few things. I know my opinion is probably much different, and seen then everyone elses, but, i see some pretty rotten cards get super high ratings and the sort. What really bothered me... is i just pretty much get "correct this, and good attempt" marks, makes me feel rock hard bottom in feeling bad, you know? I really wanted to wow people, but... Im starting to feel that even though im working on my new cards, why should i even bother? My Blood Skull monsters would probably also be influenced somehow by another idea but whatever... Im just trying to influence people into my work is all. I apologize... really.. (night for me.. will come on tommorow..) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arpeejajo Posted December 19, 2007 Report Share Posted December 19, 2007 Hey dont feel bad, it's constructive criticism. Those rotten card you talk about, they really do suck. People just rate them high because it's funny. By the way, I haven't looked at all of your cards yet, I only got up to the Slayers. So far they are really good. Just remember to capitalize things like Life Points and Graveyard. 8.75/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyrant Phoenix Posted December 19, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 19, 2007 ahh... those things... thank you apre. I just woke up, and i was just checking out my mail, to see my two grandmasters came in the mail, Graveyard is capatilized.. bah oh well, i will correct each and every one of these, when i release it with my upcoming set. by the way, quick question, would you rather see a specific monster set, or a characther set i made "characther meaning, evil side." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arpeejajo Posted December 19, 2007 Report Share Posted December 19, 2007 What you make is up to you, but I would prefer a specific monster set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyrant Phoenix Posted December 20, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 20, 2007 ok then, the next one i will show is Blood Skull then ^^. Hopefully they will be more seen then these. At least, the War Born monsters were my first true experimented set, as they had no set ability to follow, just what follows on the field. This time, the monsters each have something in common, with a tiny.. but potent other ability... :D. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
II DEFiiNED II Posted December 20, 2007 Report Share Posted December 20, 2007 Pretty good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyrant Phoenix Posted December 20, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 20, 2007 thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyrant Phoenix Posted December 20, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 20, 2007 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arpeejajo Posted December 20, 2007 Report Share Posted December 20, 2007 ok then' date=' the next one i will show is Blood Skull then ^^. Hopefully they will be more seen then these. At least, the War Born monsters were my first true experimented set, as they had no set ability to follow, just what follows on the field. This time, the monsters each have something in common, with a tiny.. but potent other ability... :D.[/quote'] If you want them to stand out more, make a booster pack and add the link into your signature. Oh and, can't wait for the Blood Skull monsters. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyrant Phoenix Posted December 20, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 20, 2007 Yeah.. im more impressed so far how the Blood Skulls are turning out then War Born. By the way, can you help me? I just received a booster pack from God GAK, and... not entirely sure how i link it all up and stuff.. like, clicking on the booster pack will lead you to a topic/thread/whatever to the entire pack list and card view.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arpeejajo Posted December 20, 2007 Report Share Posted December 20, 2007 Yeah.. im more impressed so far how the Blood Skulls are turning out then War Born. By the way' date=' can you help me? I just received a booster pack from God GAK, and... not entirely sure how i link it all up and stuff.. like, clicking on the booster pack will lead you to a topic/thread/whatever to the entire pack list and card view..[/quote'] I think they have it somewhere on the site. Did you host the boosterpack cover? If yes PM it to me and I'll make the link. Explaining it is hard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyrant Phoenix Posted December 20, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 20, 2007 yes, i do have the boosterpack cover... and its two of them. But, i dont have anything to link them too, like to a thread/topic/whatever too yet, but i will PM you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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