Squirrel Girl Posted February 10, 2010 Report Share Posted February 10, 2010 [spoiler=Card][spoiler=[b]Lore:[/b]]This card can be Special Summoned from your hand while your opponent controls 2 or more monsters. This card gains 200 ATK for each "Blackwing" monster you control. Once per turn, you can pay 400 Life Points to decrease the ATK of 1 of your opponents monster by 400, until the End Phase of your next turn.There can only be 1 face-up "Blackwing - Armored Beak" on the field. Image Credit to Jazin Kay What you think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sorrow. Posted February 10, 2010 Report Share Posted February 10, 2010 A couple of OCG problems other than that it has a pretty well thought out effect.. 8/10.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted February 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 10, 2010 Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted February 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Flame Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 Its a nice effect, though probably leaning towards OP and I would imagine it being limited. Makes a nice beatstick. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted February 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 Thanks Sephiran1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightm@re-X Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 Good card,balanced,cool pic a little ocg error,can save you from tight spots.i give it 9/10 ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted February 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 Thanks, and please point out the errors Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 There is nothing wrong with the OCG, but it could have a better version thought. My suggestion: You can Special Summon this card from your hand if your opponent controls 2 or more monsters. This card gains 200 ATK for each "Blackwing" monster you control. Once per turn, you can pay 400 Life Points to decrease the ATK of 1 monster your opponent control by 400, until the End Phase of your next turn. There can only be 1 face-up "Blackwing - Armored Beak" on the field. (<- I added this part to make the card more balanced. Think with me, you have 3 of this in your hand, and your opponent controls 2 or more monsters. Then you Special Summon 3 of this and you have an instantly 3 2900 beast stick monsters, an can reduce the ATK of 1 monster on the field by 1800, if you activate the effect of them at the same time.) Whatever, I <3 this card and must use this picture to make a Blackwing monster too. =] Rate~ 9.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted February 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 Thanks for rate and i will add the part "there can only be 1 face-up blackwing - armored beak on the field partupdated Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 This card can be Special Summoned from your hand while your opponent controls 2 or more monsters. This card gains 200 ATK for each "Blackwing" monster you control. Once per turn, you can pay 400 Life Points to decrease the ATK of 1 of your opponent's monster by 400, until the End Phase of your next turn. There can only be 1 face-up "Blackwing - Armored Beak" on the field.opponents = opponent'sGreat card, agree with Zeaux 9.1/10 like he gave, great addition to Blackwings Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted February 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 Well thanks tomtekorv Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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T-6 Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 cool card.If you may the life point cost " You take 400 damage" you could combo it with Blackwing Dragon whenever he comes out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted February 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 Maby Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
emperor 217 Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 very good pic 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted February 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 Is it just the pic that is good? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Machoke Posted February 13, 2010 Report Share Posted February 13, 2010 I like it 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JIMMYTRON Posted February 13, 2010 Report Share Posted February 13, 2010 i love BW...the image of this card...and the effect 9/10 (nothing's perfect) ~Amazing Job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted February 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 13, 2010 thank you all Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SparkWyvren Posted February 17, 2010 Report Share Posted February 17, 2010 8/10 Find a diffrent name. it should be: Blackwing-(Name here) the (type of wind or bird).. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chrid97 Posted February 17, 2010 Report Share Posted February 17, 2010 i like it, it has a nice effect and all in all its cool 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazin Kay Posted February 17, 2010 Report Share Posted February 17, 2010 Blackwing - ____ the Armored Beak? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted February 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 18, 2010 Thanks everyone Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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